Talk:The Fight Before Christmas (The Simpsons)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SCB '92 (talk · contribs) 12:03, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

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Looks fine, just a few flaws though

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   "falls to sleep" should be changed to "falls asleep", and there should be a "to" so to read "Martha Stewart asking for her help to save the family's Christmas"

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   okay

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   good

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   fine

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   no problems here

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   I really think there should be a screenshot of the episode in the infobox; it might be absent because of the limit reached of using non-free images in the article, but still

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   It'd be harsh to fail this article, so I'm passing it

   I fixed the problems. Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:34, 8 November 2011 (UTC)