Talk:The Boat Race 1906/GA1

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:52, 2 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Here's what I found:

"five-time Blue between 1886 and 1890 and David Alexander Wauchope (who had rowed in the 1895 race)." should there be a comma after 1890? Not sure if you follow the-in this case aptly named-Oxford comma.
Yeah, I'm cool with that, I've added it. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:30, 3 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"Going clear within two minute," two minutes
Oops, fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:30, 3 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The race part feels like it's pretty empty, jumping from the beginning to Barnes, which is practically the end of the race. If there's nothing available before that then it's fine, though it did leave me feel wanting.
Yeah, indeed it was a bit of a parade for Cambridge this year, and they just chilled out over the last portion of the race... Nothing more I'm afraid. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:30, 3 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review Wizardman, much appreciated, I've addressed and responded to your concerns above. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:30, 3 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]