Talk:The Amazing Adventures of Kavalier & Clay/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. 750 h+ 15:01, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: 2804:7F4:8081:44E2:DED:F98C:4E15:54E6 (talk · contribs) 22:28, 23 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 15:00, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Fail. There is unsupported text, like a part in the section Inspiration and a whole paragraph in Cultural references. Some sources also seem of questionable quality, including "The Amazing Website of Kavalier & Clay", "Cinematical.com", and "fact.org"; januarymagazine.com doesn't seem very reliable either. Source formatting needs to be consistent. The Characters section is fully unsourced. Prose wise, there is too many single/two sentence paragraphs. Could possibly be a GA, interesting read, just not quite there yet. 750 h+ 15:01, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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