Talk:The Alliance (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 17:08, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will review soon. Ruby 2010/2013 17:08, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Images, dabs, and external links look good
Is that the correct production code?
"The party planning scene, which Jenna Fischer named her favorite scene and called "longest most horrible meeting of all time," was almost entirely ad-libbed.[1][6]" - Could use some tweaking (a word or two are missing, I think)
Which scenes did Wilmore call his favorite? It's not very clear
As with "Basketball", this article could really use some more reviews. I recommend searching for others

I believe that's it. Will place the article on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 21:43, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I found another review and I tried to make the wording clearer on all the prose issues. And yeah, that's the production code. Kind of a stupid number.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:20, 8 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article looks good. Happy to pass for GA! Ruby 2010/2013 01:58, 9 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]