Talk:Teardrops on My Guitar/GA1

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Reviewer: Candyo32 14:58, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Heyyyooo Ipod!! Another T-Swizzle article? Fabooo. I'll be reviewing it for you.

Lead

Perhaps rename Background and inspiration.

Most Taylor Swift song articles like Tim McGraw (song), Our Song (song), White Horse (song) and so on just have it as "Background". I think it'd be best to keep them cohesive. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:06, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Comma after Fearless (2008)

Done.

gentle ----> a gentle

Done.

"Teardrops on My Guitar" was commercially successful. It at number thirteen on the Billboard Hot 100, becoming the best-charting single from Taylor Swift on the chart." --> combine these sentences

Done.

endeared by: ----> endeared by, commenting:

Done.

You should but that big quote by her in the second paragraph in a box or a blockquote.

I didn't like the way it separated the paragraph, so I paraphrase it. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:06, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Critical reception

Paraphrase the first PopMatters quote a bit

Done.

"Chuck Taylor, also of Billboard, reviewed the pop version release of "Teardrops on My Guitar". He said, "A beautiful mainstream intro to an artist whose rise is ably exemplified by her last name." --> ...."Teardrops on My Guitar", and said that it was "A...."

Done.

Music video

have set --> have been set

Done.

American singer and actor Tyler Hilton

Done.

References

Ref 1 - Link Big Machine Records, this is the first mentioning.

Done.

Ref 11 needs an accessdate

It does have an accessdate, but it doesn't appear because there is no url. I have been told to remove the music notes URL numerous times, so... -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:31, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Ref 15 for New York use the location= paramater, and Billboard now published by Prometheus Global Media

The location parameter is already being used and the magazine at the time was published by Nielsen Business Media, Inc. So it should stay for that. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:31, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Ref 21, 22, 23, 24, 57, 58 Billbord now published by Prometheus Global Media

Done.

Ref 32 Work is CMT.com, publisher MTV Networks (Viacom).

Changed to CMT. Isn't Viacom, the ultimate owner, enough? -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message}

Ref 34, 36, 37, 38, 39, 43 publisher MTV Networks (Viacom).

Isn't Viacom, the ultimate owner, enough? -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message}

Ref 43 unitalicize CMT.

Done.

Ref 44 unitalicize iTunes Store

Done.

Ref 33 - Work is MTV.com, publisher is MTV Networks (Viacom).

Changed to MTV. And again, shouldn't Viacom suffice? -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 18:31, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

Ref 41 - Unitalicize MTV, publisher is MTV Networks (Viacom).

Done.

I think that's about it! Good work! Candyo32 14:58, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

I'm fine with the changes made. I'll pass. Candyo32 15:51, 24 April 2011 (UTC)