Talk:Take Me Home (Alexandra Stan song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 10:20, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
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Will start on this later today; most probable case here. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:20, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Sure you can't find a source for genre(s) to add in the body?
- The sources on this are limited, there is no website reporting about the genre of this. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- List as Alexandra Stan under Composer(s), but with no wikilink per WP:OVERLINK
- "as a single for digital download and streaming" → "for digital download as a single" but keep streaming too if you can add a source for that
- See my comment on that on the "Sober" GAN. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- "while the latter acted" → "while the latter served"
- "Musically, "Take Me Home" has been" → "Musically, the song has been"
- "Its lyrics find Stan" → "The lyrics of "Take Me Home" find Stan" and start the second para on this sentence
- Are you sure we need a full introduction of Jonathan Currinn in the lead?
- This is what you usually do when you only have the review of one critic. Yes. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- Cartoon network freak Yes that's fine, but you don't need the ref in the lead too. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:44, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Alright. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:49, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- Cartoon network freak Yes that's fine, but you don't need the ref in the lead too. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:44, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- This is what you usually do when you only have the review of one critic. Yes. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- "thought that the tracks's theme" → "thought that the theme"
- "with the single's release" → "with the single release"
- "it portrays Stan performing" → "the video portrays Stan performing"
Background and composition
[edit]- "while the latter acted" → "while the latter served"
- "was handled by Andrei Kerestely" → "were handled by Andrei Kerestely"
- "is credited for providing" → "received credited for providing"
- The streaming release is not supported by the iTunes ref, only digital download is; either remove the former info or add a ref to verify it.
- see my comment on "Sober". Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:26, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- "has been performed by Stan on several concerts" → "had been performed by Stan at several concerts"
- "revealed that initially, a more complex production had been planned" → "revealed that a more complex production had initially been planned"
- "on Stan's wish" → "from Stan's wish"
- "and also likened it to her own" → "and also likened it to Stan's single"
- "them at home; "home" is used" → "them at home, with "home" being used"
Music video
[edit]- "An accompanying music video for "Take Me Home", directed" → "A music video for "Take Me Home", directed"
- "alongside red-white hot pants" → "as well as red-white hot pants"
- "praised the music video" → "praised the video"
- "CelebMix's Currinn commended Stan's" → "Currinn commended Stan's"
- "emotional delivery yet slightly criticized" → "emotional delivery, yet slightly criticized"
- "close-up shots which made the visual" → "close-up shots that made the music video"
Track listing
[edit]- Good
Release history
[edit]- Same issue here with streaming info
- See my comment on "Sober". Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:27, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Use the tool to make sure that all of these are archived.
- 14.5% copyvio score, looks very good!
- Remove "on iTunes" and "auf iTunes" from title(s) on ref 2
- Add the countries in brackets here; iTunes (GB) for an example of one to do
- MOS:QWQ issues for ref 3
- Ref 5 needs the language parameter since it's in Romanian
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold for now, issues are not too prominent and nothing that you can't fix! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:52, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for the review. The issues have been addressed apart from where commented. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:30, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass! --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:30, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for the review. The issues have been addressed apart from where commented. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:30, 31 May 2020 (UTC)