Talk:Take Me Home (Alexandra Stan song)

Take Me Home (Alexandra Stan song) was one of the Music good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
May 31, 2020	Good article nominee	Listed
July 10, 2020	Articles for deletion	Redirected

Current status: Delisted good article

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Take Me Home (Alexandra Stan song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 10:20, 30 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Will start on this later today; most probable case here. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:20, 30 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Sure you can't find a source for genre(s) to add in the body?

The sources on this are limited, there is no website reporting about the genre of this. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

List as Alexandra Stan under Composer(s), but with no wikilink per WP:OVERLINK
"as a single for digital download and streaming" → "for digital download as a single" but keep streaming too if you can add a source for that

See my comment on that on the "Sober" GAN. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"while the latter acted" → "while the latter served"
"Musically, "Take Me Home" has been" → "Musically, the song has been"
"Its lyrics find Stan" → "The lyrics of "Take Me Home" find Stan" and start the second para on this sentence
Are you sure we need a full introduction of Jonathan Currinn in the lead?

This is what you usually do when you only have the review of one critic. Yes. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Cartoon network freak Yes that's fine, but you don't need the ref in the lead too. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:44, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: Alright. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:49, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"thought that the tracks's theme" → "thought that the theme"
"with the single's release" → "with the single release"
"it portrays Stan performing" → "the video portrays Stan performing"

Background and composition

"while the latter acted" → "while the latter served"
"was handled by Andrei Kerestely" → "were handled by Andrei Kerestely"
"is credited for providing" → "received credited for providing"
The streaming release is not supported by the iTunes ref, only digital download is; either remove the former info or add a ref to verify it.

see my comment on "Sober". Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:26, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"has been performed by Stan on several concerts" → "had been performed by Stan at several concerts"
"revealed that initially, a more complex production had been planned" → "revealed that a more complex production had initially been planned"
"on Stan's wish" → "from Stan's wish"
"and also likened it to her own" → "and also likened it to Stan's single"
"them at home; "home" is used" → "them at home, with "home" being used"

Music video

"An accompanying music video for "Take Me Home", directed" → "A music video for "Take Me Home", directed"
"alongside red-white hot pants" → "as well as red-white hot pants"
"praised the music video" → "praised the video"
"CelebMix's Currinn commended Stan's" → "Currinn commended Stan's"
"emotional delivery yet slightly criticized" → "emotional delivery, yet slightly criticized"
"close-up shots which made the visual" → "close-up shots that made the music video"

Track listing

Good

Release history

Same issue here with streaming info

See my comment on "Sober". Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:27, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

Use the tool to make sure that all of these are archived.
14.5% copyvio score, looks very good!
Remove "on iTunes" and "auf iTunes" from title(s) on ref 2
Add the countries in brackets here; iTunes (GB) for an example of one to do
MOS:QWQ issues for ref 3
Ref 5 needs the language parameter since it's in Romanian

Final comments and verdict

On hold for now, issues are not too prominent and nothing that you can't fix! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:52, 30 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: Thank you very much for the review. The issues have been addressed apart from where commented. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:30, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

✓ Pass! --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:30, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]