Talk:Suus/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:46, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Remove Sterling Sound, New York → the studios is just for the ones the song was recorded
• Format: Digital download → missing

Lead

• Polystar → Polystar records
• explores an emotional circumstance reflecting for the moments → addresses an emotional circumstance reflecting the moments
• favourable acclaim → postive reviews
• stage presence → this is from the performance
• Beside that, → remove
• various occasions in Cyprus, Hungary, Romania and the Netherlands. → year(s)?

 Done

Background and composition

• As part from the → As part of the
• Musically, the song is an Albanian-language folklore-inspired ballad of a musical genre from southern Albania. → can you repreashe this?
• It lyrically explores → Its lyrics address

Critical reception

• was outspoken → was given
• "appealing" stage presence → this regards the performance, not the song

Promotion and music video

• "Suus" was featured at number 18 in 2014, 32 in 2015, 24 in 2016, 47 in 2017 and 58 in the 2018 editions of the Eurovision Top 250 charts. → "Suus" was featured in multiple lists of the Eurovision Top 250 charts, from 2014 to 2018, its highest peak was at number 18 in 2014.
• "its a poetic video which through its all components, directing, camera, lighting, costumes, requisites, composition, symbols, colors and atmosphere intends to depict this life's absurd through an abstract art form". → use your own words more often
• Can you exlain how the video screanshot contributes to the article?

I guess the screenshot visually amplifies Nishliu's comment about the music video.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:38, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

She is not very incisive regarding it, not veery poetic regarding standing on top of a box. Better to remove it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:58, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Okay!

Festivali i Këngës

• Nishliu and her song "Suus" → Nishliu's song "Suus"
• immediately → remove

Baku

• 146 points ranking first by the jury's 131 points and third by the televote of 131 points → someting doesn't add up!
• 146 points placed third by the jury's 157 points and eighth by the televote of 106 points → what is going on with this math?

@MarioSoulTruthFan: [1][2] The jury's vote and the televote counted for 50% of the total outcome--Lorik17 (talk) 21:59, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

Thanks. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:20, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

Track listing

• Do you mean CD single?

Release history

• Do you mean CD single?

As part of the Compilation CD album; I thought the term "CD" was enough--Lorik17 (talk) 21:07, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

It's not, you need to remove it from the section album. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:27, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

References

• Reference 2 → author is missing
• Reference 5 → missing publisher

Overall

• No genre for the song?

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Critics only called it a ballad, it was difficult to find anything about the genre.--Lorik17 (talk) 20:47, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

• The CD you mention is a CD single or the song was included in an album? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:21, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I only found sources of the song's digital release as part of the ESC - Baku 2012 Compilation CD album.--Lorik17 (talk) 20:47, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

So the formats, in the infobox, can only have digital download you need to remove the CD. You need to do something simmilar to what we did on "It's All About You (Juliana Pasha song)", a note has to be created. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:05, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I found something about a promotional CD [3][4]--Lorik17 (talk) 21:48, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

The discogs is a fake version. It reads in the description. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:12, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

Oh, okay!--Lorik17 (talk) 22:14, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Everything was fixed now.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:04, 3 May 2020 (UTC)