Talk:Supermarine Sea Lion I/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:15, 3 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "at Bournemouth, England in" comma after England.
• Could link Aircraft registration.
• "British elimination trials" what were these?
• "Later on during the race, the aircraft inverted and sank " presumably it was on the water at the time?
• " Lion I.[1] [8]" no spaces between refs.
• "the fly-off the" what's that?
• "Supermarine remained at sea" the company Supermarine?
• "Aircraft 1919-1972." en-dash.

That's all I have, nice article. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:11, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: All above points addressed, thanks for the review. Amitchell125 (talk) 13:00, 4 September 2021 (UTC)