Talk:Sunday Morning (No Doubt song)

Dairy Queen?

This article states: "After rinsing her finger Stefani says 'now you're looking like I used to' while Tony Kanal is cleaning the tomato sauce off the floor. This is most likely a reference to one of Stefani's teenage job of scrubbing floors at Dairy Queen." Doubt(ful), the lyrics are about a woman who once was infatuated with a man who perhaps was not as infatuated with her, but while she has since gotten over him, he is not over her, so the table are turned and "now you're looking like I used to." The former boyfriend hanging around during the video, ignored by Stefani, would seem to bear this out. In any case, this and the article's interpretation are clearly original research, unless the article's writer has some reference to suggest the dairy queen interpretation was either the director's or band's intent. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.1.168.113 (talk) 15:48, 13 August 2010 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:05, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:

Lead

• recorded by the American -> recorded by American

•  Done

• available as -> available as a

•  Done

• cassette single, and -> cassette single and

• It's a serial comma–commonly used in American English

• 1997 by -> 1997 through

•  Done

• the breakup -> their breakup

•  Done

• The song was written -> you've already used "song"

•  Done

• with one calling -> with one of them calling

•  Done

• peaking in the -> peaking within the

•  Done

• certified gold -> certified Gold

• Gold does not need to be capitalized

Background and recording

• Young, and musician -> Young and musician

• Serial comma

• Who is Angle

• Gary Angle proceeds the sentence

• officials, and had -> officials and had

• Serial comma

• band, and -> band and

• Serial comma

• when he did -> when he did so

•  Done

• more and more songs -> several songs

•  Done

• then his girlfriend -> his then-girlfriend

Composition

• Flawless

Critical reception

• Bleach from his -> Bleach, writing for
• blog also enjoyed -> blog, also enjoyed
• single... From -> single. [...] From

Commercial performance

• successful, charting -> successful, with it charting
• US -> United States
• Try to not use "song" every time
• certified gold -> certified Gold

• Like I said, this would be incorrect

• at positions -> at number
• well, peaking -> well, with it peaking
• the UK -> the United Kingdom
• and number -> and at number

Music video

• The song's music video -> An accompanying music video for the song
• Remove "sometime"
• band, after -> band, following
• video opens -> video commences
• ex-lover (Terry Hall) walks -> ex-lover, Terry Hall, walks

• Terry Halls plays the lover, he isn't the actual lover though. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

• with the ex-lover -> with Hall

• Same as above. Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• Credits and personnel adapted from the Tragic Kingdom liner notes. -> Credits adapted from the liner notes of Tragic Kingdom
• cover art -> photography

Release history

• Unlink formats and label

• Outcome: On hold for 7 days. Best of luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:48, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: I have changed the article accordingly; thanks a ton! Carbrera (talk) 16:40, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

• @Carbrera: Passing article. Congratulations! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:33, 10 June 2016 (UTC)

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