Talk:Suffer in Peace/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:53, 6 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

The producers should be mentioned with a source
No source for the label or release date
Say that is a coutnry album in the body of the article
No source to state when it was recorded

When did GANs require a reference to be put in the infobox? DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Since you don't add it in the body of the article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

As everything was move to the body of the article, doesn't need sources here. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:58, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

at numbers 2 and 4 → at numbers two and four
charts respectively → charts, respectively.
and spawned three singles: → It spawned three singles,
State a little regardging the performance of the singles
Do the same regarding the music and lyric content
You can mention the producers of the album
Other promoton of the album? NBC and nother concert
This needs to go more in depth

How's it looking? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:31, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Background and development

Redneck Crazy → release date of the album in between brackets
title track and "Whiskey in My Water" → title track, released on... and "Whiskey in My Water" (DATE)
"A Guy Walks Into a Bar" → same as previous

Is this right? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I should have been more specific, the year is just fine. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:29, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Music and lyrics

swampy banjo groove → swampy groove (as the source states)
bar joke → old joke
writers' round → people are not familiar with this concept
Jason Aldean → wikilink
while reminding himself of his religious upbringing → not on given source
"Better in Boots" is a bro-country song → same as previous
wanting to get a chance with an uptown girl → "getting the girl at the end of the day" (quite diferent)
wanted it to have class and not be overly patriotic. → wanted it to show "gratitude and respect and to honor the troops"

How's the change-up from the "writers' round" wording? DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

You need to explain the concept, the rest is fine. What do they do at those gaterings? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:17, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

How is it? DepressedPer (talk) 14:45, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Outstanding. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:00, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Singles and promotion

to build up hype for the album → byas and doesn't come with the source
certified Gold → remove wikilik + gold not on capital letter
A music video directed by Jeff Venable was created for the singl → Its music video was directed by Jeff Venable
numbers 47 and 52 on both the Billboard Hot Country Songs and Country Airplay charts respectively → numbers 47 and 52 on both the Billboard Hot Country Songs and Country Airplay charts, respectively
A music video directed by Eric Welch was made for the single and premiered on June 15, 2015 → The single's music video was directed by Eric Welch and premiered on June 15, 2015
instead push → change
he will headline → he would headline
All these charts need to be wikilinked only once

Done DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

Suffer in Peace received mixed reviews from music critics divided over the production and lyrical content. → Suffer in Peace received mixed reviews from music critics. (The other sentence can and shoud be used in the lead)
Jamie Parmenter of Renowned for Sound praised → Jamie Parmenter of Renowned for Sound commended
pacing a bit slow → doesn't sound good
despite praising → however, he lauded
mixed reviews from music critics → The more mixed is Spin, where are the mixed reviews and the negative ones? There are a lot more reviews online. One Country.

Added another Billboard article in there as well. DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing

Missing total length

Done DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Personnel

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel.
AllMusic is not a good source for album credits, unless it is a really old album. Use another one

Done DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Chart performance

Move it to the critical reception and rename the section as "Reception"
Billboard 200 → wikilink
4 → four (numbers between 1 and 10 have to be spelled out)
2 → same as preivous
selling 36,300 copies for the week, 41,629 units in total album activity (including streaming and TEA)→ selling 36,300 copies in tradional album sales and 41,629 units, including streaming and track equivalent album sales
Move the above sources to the end of the sentence
On the Billboard 200, it dropped to number 26 the week after and went to number 46 the week of May 30.[36][37] On the week of June 6, it fell to number 71,[38] another spot to 72 the next week,[39] and left the top 100 by dropping down to number 121 for the week of June 20 → I get the point; just say "It left the top 100 on the week of June 2, 2015 (?), spending (insert number of weeks) on the chart."
,before leaving the next week. → remove (don't need to make the same point twice)

Done DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Album

Fine

Singles

Remove → Songs have their own articles you mention peak positions

Done DepressedPer (talk) 23:20, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Promotional singles

Same as previous, add the promo single release on the article

I couldn't find the exact release date of the title track. DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Can you find a realiable source saying it was a promo single? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 02:39, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The only reliable source of a promo single I can find is for "Poor Boy"/"Damn Good Friends" on Ebay UK. No source for the title track. DepressedPer (talk) 14:05, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Don't add it then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:07, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

References

The Spin source seems to be dead, archive it.
Radio.com, Radio & Records, Youtube, Country Music Television, AllMusic, auspOp → not work
Entertainment Weekly, Billboard and Roughstock are missing publisher. You have two option here, you either remove the publisher from all of the sources or add it here.
Don't SHOUT in references

Do you mean that Radio.com, YouTube, Country Music Television, AllMusic and auspOp shouldn't be recognized under "|website=" and Radio & Records shouldn't fall under "|magazine=" and just replace them with "|publisher="? DepressedPer (talk) 22:57, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:02, 7 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

@DepressedPer: Do a release history secton in the end of the article. I made some minor changes, for example, including the producers on the backgroud section see if you are fie with them. I did everything section by section so it would be easier to spot.MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:32, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I've added the release history section. DepressedPer (talk) 14:45, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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