Jump to content

Talk:Stronger (Britney Spears song)

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Good articleStronger (Britney Spears song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
November 6, 2011Good article nomineeListed

Orphaned references in Stronger (Britney Spears song)

[edit]

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Stronger (Britney Spears song)'s orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "mtvreview":

Reference named "pitch":

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 16:48, 3 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

[edit]

The reviews do not seem that positive to me. - Johnnyboytoy (talk) 19:35, 28 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I think they are positive: "the best dance track", "another boom-bastic upbeat track", "Spears shines on the tongue-in-cheek lead single, the triumphant "Stronger"", "could crush the entire self-help industry with its melody alone". The only one that seems to be mixed is the one by NME: "sounds scarier and more robotic than the Backstreet Boys". I'm going to wait for somebody to review the article before changing something more :) . - Sauloviegas (talk) 18:26, 31 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

What chair is it?

[edit]

Definitely, NOT an Emeco 1006 which has 3 vertical bars. This chair has 3 horizontal bars. Reference doesn't mention what chair it actually is? 76.171.6.210 (talk) 08:34, 8 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

[edit]
GA toolbox
Reviewing
This review is transcluded from Talk:Stronger (Britney Spears song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Basilisk4u (talk · contribs) 01:12, 30 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will be reviewing this article for GA. More than two months is too long to wait for a review. Please bear with me as I may be a bit busy for the next few days. Cheers! Basilisk4u (talk) 01:12, 30 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, the article is looking pretty good, nice work! I just have a few concerns that should be addressed. I am starting with the prose and I will break it down into sections. Basilisk4u (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

[edit]
Lead
  • "After meeting up with producers Max Martin and Rami in Sweden, the singer started to record several songs for the album" - The "started" to record is not necessary, unless these sessions were not completed in Sweden.
    • Also, the Rami link goes to a disambig page. I think that his full name, Rami Yacoub, should be in the article, unless Rami is his official stage name that people would know him better by.
  • "It received positive reviews from music critics, who considered the song as innovative" ---> "who described the song as innovative." I think that would be better. Also, innovative in what way? Musically? Lyrically? Clarify that.
  • "An accompanying music video was directed by Joseph Kahn, who considered it as a departure from Spears' previous music videos." Same here, briefly clarify how this was a departure from her other music videos.
  • "The concept was entirely created by Spears herself, who wanted to do a dance sequence on a chair, drive in a car and break-up witha boyfriend on it." This sentence is a bit strange. I actually don't think these details are needed in the lead, probably just mentioning that she created the concept is good enough. Also, break-up is a noun, while the verb is without the hyphen.
  • This is just a curiosity, but has she really only performed the song in two of her concert tours? I would think that being such a popular song she would play it at every concert.

Okay, that is all for the lead :)

Background and composition
  • "In 1999, Spears started to work on her second studio album" --> began work
  • "After meeting up with Max Martin and Rami Yacoub in Sweden, the singer started to record several songs for the album" I think it should just be "recorded several songs" since she seemed to have finished songs while in Sweden
  • "features a heavy innovative dance beat" - Again, innovative in what way? And when the source says it is innovative it should be in quotes.
  • "Music critics noticed the song as Spears' declaration of independence, which is perceived in self-empowerment lines such as 'I'm not your property' and 'I don't need nobody', despite not being written by the singer, while they speculated that the song is directed to the singer's record label and her management." This sentence is a bit long. Perhaps break it into two sentences, and I don't think the part about Spears not writing the song is necessary here.
  • "David Browne of Entertainment Weekly compared "Stronger" to Rolling Stones' "The Last Time" (1965)." What aspect of the song did Browne compare it to?
Critical response
  • Stephanie McGrath of Jam! considered the song "the best dance track" of Oops!, while commenting "is it every bit as good as *Nsync's "Bye, Bye, Bye" or The Backstreet Boys' "The One"." ---> "deeming the song "every bit as good as..."
  • The part in the quote about "Don't Go Knockin on My Door" is not needed, just remove that part
  • "David Veitch of Calgary Sun considered "Stronger" as 'another boom-bastic upbeat track'" --> considered "Stronger" to be
  • "A review of NME" --> A review by the NME staff
Chart performance
  • The United States performance should be discussed first, as it is her home country
  • "from the United Kingdom, falling to number eleven in the following." In the following what? haha
  • "for selling over 125,000 units of the single." This exact wording is used three times in the paragraph, try and mix it up a bit
Music video
  • "Kahn revealed that the first thing that came to his mind about the concept was a chair sequence in Janet Jackson's music video for her single "The Pleasure Principle"" --> Kahn revealed that upon hearing Spears' chair idea, he was immediately reminded of Janet Jackson's music video for her single "The Pleasure Principle""
  • Make sure all uses of Britney are made into Spears instead
Live performances and covers

"Then, a giant metal orb was lowered onstage and lifted again to reveal Spears standing behind it, wearing glittery jeans and an orange halter top, while opening the show with a dance-oriented performance of the song." Try to make this into two sentences

  • "On the episode, McHale's character Artie has a hallucination of "Stronger" in which he is also a member of the football team, during a dental visit." --> "In the episode, McHale's character Artie has a hallucination of himself singing "Stronger" during a dental visit."
Sourcing
  • Is #3 a book? If so, the book should be put into a Bibliography section and the page number should be in the regular source, see John Frusciante for an example
    It doesn't have to be like that. Look at "Rehab (Rihanna song)". It also contains a book reference. I have nominated it for FA two times, and nobody ever complained about it.
Okay, no problem
  • MTV News is published by Viacom, put that in all MTV News citations
  • I'm not sure if #9 and #10 are reliable
  • What is source #19?

I will now put this review on hold for seven days. Address these concerns, and you've got yourself a Good Article! :)

Comments

[edit]

I'm going to fix these issues soon! I'm currently busy at school and I'm also taking care of another review. Thanks in advance. :) - Saulo Talk to Me 21:47, 31 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Wow, I am very impressed with your fast response! I have now passed the article. Congrats and thanks for all your hard work! Basilisk4u (talk) 16:55, 5 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Two versions

[edit]

Were there two versions of this video? I can find several links on YouTube but I remember seeing an early release of the video where there are differences:

"Hush just stop...." at that moment, the party freezes.

In the second seqment of the video, the car jumps the bridge. (drawbridge)

Has anyone else seen this or do I need to cut back on the Diet Dew?

I've known of re-edits (the opening lyrics of 'Arabian Nights' from Disney's Aladdin springs to mind) being done, but I am beginning to wonder about this, since it'd been a long time since I saw that video, and the ones I found recently show the chair falling in front of the car and her spinning out. (Oddly this doesn't make much sense in the context of the video.) 76.171.6.210 (talk) 05:34 8 March 2012

I think so, but we need reliable sources to prove that there actually were two versions. - Saulo Talk to Me 20:09, 9 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

stronger in france is gold

[edit]

stronger is gold search before change and please dont chang again — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.138.78.69 (talk) 14:24, 6 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

stronger is gold in sweden

[edit]

at first i want to say that i'm sorry about the mistake of france gold and that song is gold in swden — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.138.78.69 (talk) 05:13, 7 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

certification

[edit]

please dont cut the certification on sweden enter the link and on the last page it show stronger in gold — Preceding unsigned comment added by 85.64.108.233 (talk) 01:40, 30 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just added archive links to one external link on Stronger (Britney Spears song). Please take a moment to review my edit. If necessary, add {{cbignore}} after the link to keep me from modifying it. Alternatively, you can add {{nobots|deny=InternetArchiveBot}} to keep me off the page altogether. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true to let others know.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—cyberbot IITalk to my owner:Online 10:56, 11 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 5 external links on Stronger (Britney Spears song). Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 06:42, 24 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Release date

[edit]

Britney Spears said in her booklet that comes with the CD for "The Singles Collection" that "Stronger" debuted on December 2, 2000. http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-XOG0lpqn2vk/Vbg9xlRGneI/AAAAAAAAVcQ/Vm1WGK0vWl0/s1600/Imagen%2B%25286%2529.jpg DatBoy101 (talk) 02:43, 3 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

[edit]

Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 2 external links on Stronger (Britney Spears song). Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

This message was posted before February 2018. After February 2018, "External links modified" talk page sections are no longer generated or monitored by InternetArchiveBot. No special action is required regarding these talk page notices, other than regular verification using the archive tool instructions below. Editors have permission to delete these "External links modified" talk page sections if they want to de-clutter talk pages, but see the RfC before doing mass systematic removals. This message is updated dynamically through the template {{source check}} (last update: 5 June 2024).

  • If you have discovered URLs which were erroneously considered dead by the bot, you can report them with this tool.
  • If you found an error with any archives or the URLs themselves, you can fix them with this tool.

Cheers.—InternetArchiveBot (Report bug) 21:12, 1 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Stronger_(Britney_Spears_song)&oldid=1194614022"