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Reviewer: Extraordinary Writ (talk · contribs) 00:33, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to take a look at what looks to be a very interesting article. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 00:33, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Prose quality looks good.
  • You might want to explain briefly what a filibuster is. I suppose it seems somewhat obvious, but a reader could easily be confused if he was unfamiliar with that term. (Sure, he could click on the wikilink, but it's usually good to provide some background anyway.)
  • This is a pretty short article. While that's not a problem in and of itself (see WP:GANOT), I do want to make sure that all necessary information is covered. Have you looked, for instance, through the results that Google Scholar provides? On a cursory search, for instance, I found this article (see page 26), which says that Thurmond's filibuster "would have lasted longer had Thurmond’s doctors not forced him to quit out of concern for kidney damage." If that's true, it certainly belongs in the article. You can also get free access to a variety of scholarly sources through WP:TWL, including JSTOR, ProQuest, etc. You might find something useful there, as well.
    • I realize this article is rather short for a GAN, but I believe all of the main information is covered. I had seen that article previously, but the claim about kidney damage is sourced to an online article in The State entitled "Strom Thurmond: Historic Filibuster Waged To Stop Civil Rights Plan", which seems to have since disappeared from the web. As the original source is now gone, I felt it might not be correct to cite the article. I've added a sentence from Thurmond's daughter's memoir which talks more about his motivation, and I found this book which gives more info on the lead-up to the filibuster (I plan to thoroughly incorporate this source tomorrow).
  • I'm also a bit concerned about the quality of the sourcing, which consists mostly of newspaper articles. While that again is not bad in and enough itself, it's usually good to also include citations to books and journal articles. These are more reliable, and they also help ensure that all perspectives are represented. Looking through some of the sites I listed above should help alleviate this issue.
    • I added the newspaper articles in preparation for this nom to include a perspective from the time of the filibuster - I think most of the sources are currently recent online articles, but I agree that including more books and journals will help to improve the reliability and size of the article. Thanks for the review so far, looking forward to more input! AviationFreak💬 06:04, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have more to say in the days to come. Until then, thanks for your work on this article! Extraordinary Writ (talk) 01:38, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Here are some things I found that you might consider including. I'll be glad to provide sources if you need them.

This is one of those rare occasions when I'm actually getting some use out of my free Newspapers.com subscription. Adding some of these things should help bulk up the article, ensuring that it meets the broadness criterion. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 07:10, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Here's another clip, this time from the New York Times, 30 Aug 1957. This one is paywalled as well, but I think you should be able to read it here. I can provide a transcription if necessary.
    • I can't access this source - It seems to be a hard paywall, and the only bit I get access to is a low-res (unreadable) photo of the page, as well as a plaintext blurb from the start of the article. Thank you for your other clippings - I may have to apply for Newspapers.com access myself! AviationFreak💬 06:18, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Take some time to incorporate some of these sources, and we'll see where that leaves us. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 18:14, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've incorporated most of these, with the exceptions of the Knowland "cruel and unusual punishment" quote and the TimesMachine one. Thank you for the sources and the review thus far! AviationFreak💬 06:18, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref no. 7 ("Filibuster and Cloture") doesn't seem to be working correctly. It initially delivers me to that site, but I'm then redirected to a separate (and irrelevant) site entitled "About Filibusters and Cloture". If this isn't just me, the link should probably be changed.
  • If the sources permit it, I'd recommend elaborating on Thurmond's arguments against the bill, e.g. unnecessary, violates states' rights, violates right to a jury trial, etc. You might also briefly summarize the provisions of the Act: it's useful background for understanding Thurmond's arguments.

Cheers, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 07:14, 3 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • I have two more sources for you, this time courtesy of HathiTrust. (They've done yeoman's work in providing access to public-domain books, making them a very useful site for historical research.) They are here and here. I'm not sure how much new information they contain, but they should at least enable you to replace some of the less reliable sources. There may be other relevant books available on HathiTrust, so you might want to take a look around.
  • After you've included everything that ought to be included, I would suggest expanding the lead so that it fully summarizes the content. One 5–7-sentence paragraph should suffice for an article of this size.

Extraordinary Writ (talk) 06:46, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You can consider this review to be on hold pending the resolution of the above issues. (I never bother putting the review formally on hold, which in my view is just extra paperwork.) That being said, I'm in no hurry to finish this up - don't worry if you're unable to get to it anytime soon. I just want to be clear that I've said all I have to say for now. Cheers, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 01:07, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the sources, I've incorporated them both and bulked up the lede. Let me know if you see anything that could use revision or is questionable. Thank you for your patience as well, I've been putting this off for what feels like a bit too long now :P. AviationFreak💬 03:29, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The main Civil Rights Act article talks about bringing in cots for Senators. If this is verifiable, it could be included.
  • More importantly, there are a few places where some more background would be useful:
    • The article says almost nothing about Thurmond himself. While there's no need for a mini-biography, some coverage of his previous activities, specifically his 1948 Presidential run, would likely be useful in helping the reader evaluate his position on the Act.
    • Along the same lines, you might note that Thurmond was reelected myriad times.
    • The article almost makes it sound like the Act gave African-Americans the right to vote. In reality, of course, it only provided some additional protections of that preexisting right. I would explain briefly what changes the bill made, thereby aiding the reader in evaluating the merits of Thurmond's position.
      • Added to "Background and goals"
  • If possible, I'd elaborate on Thurmond's arguments. It appears that states' rights and jury trials were discussed, and he also contended (based on the 48 state election laws) that the bill was unnecessary.
    • Added a sentence on the reasoning behind reading the election laws, but I don't see too much coverage on states' rights or jury trials - this source says he discussed a history of juries, but exavtly how that related to the bill's main provisions is unclear to me. AviationFreak💬 04:24, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hopefully, these additions will provide additional context to the reader. Thanks again for your work on this article! Extraordinary Writ (talk) 06:30, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I believe all of the above requests are done or otherwise responded to - I agree that this will help with context, I found myself including stuff I was surprised wasn't already in the article. AviationFreak💬 04:24, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • His arguments also included - this is a fragment, presumably placed by mistake. I'm guessing you'll either want to remove it or to complete the sentence.
    • Thanks, I completely missed this.
  • A bit of a nitpick: the lead says it is "widely seen as racist", while the body says only that it "has been described as racist". Either is fine as long as the lead's content is replicated in the body.
    • Since the filibuster seems to be getting a bit of attention from Congress these days there were a couple new sources available to pull from for this. Changed the second statement to "widely described".
  • Optional: Although you rather strongly imply it, the article nowhere identifies Thurmond as a Democrat. Since the IP editors have been clamoring for it, adding it in wouldn't hurt.
    • Added, as it also helps clarify that Thurmond didn't run for the Senate as a Dixiecrat.
  • I think the "served in the Senate for 48 years" sentence would fit better at the end, since it provides subsequent history.
    • Done, definitely more of an "Outcome" than a "Background".
  • The issue about juries is discussed here, although Thurmond isn't specifically mentioned. (As I recall, other sources do make the connection.) Feel free to add it in.
    • Perhaps I'm just not seeing something blindingly obvious here, but the source above and the one I linked earlier (here) don't appear to match up. The Smithsonian says that the bill included "an amendment giving a person charged with contempt for disobeying a judge’s order... the right to a trial by jury", while the AP writes that Thurmond "launched into a history of Anglo-Saxon juries to counter the bill's proposal to allow judges to punish cases of civil contempt without a jury trial". The way I'm reading these it looks like they directly contradict each other. Did the bill want to allow or disallow trial by jury to those charged with civil contempt?
      • As a result of a compromise with the other Southerners, the bill required juries in all but the most minor cases. However, this wasn't good enough for Thurmond, who insisted that juries be required in all cases. Crespino discusses this (in Strom Thurmond's America) at page 113. (He actually has a lot that might worth including; see pgs. 113-118. I'd especially consider adding more about Thurmond's interactions with Russell, Talmadge, and the Southern Caucus. There's also some new information about printing costs and...bodily functions.) Extraordinary Writ (talk) 17:29, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • If you care, the article on Republicans/the Republican Party is linked twice in the body. See MOS:DUPLINK.
    • Done.

My comments are getting less and less substantive, which is usually a good sign that the review is nearing its close. Cheers! Extraordinary Writ (talk) 06:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Glad to hear it! Thanks for all your help thus far! AviationFreak💬 13:37, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I did respond above to your question about juries, although you may not have seen it because of a subsequent edit. I think some of that information, for instance jury trials, Thurmond's combative relationships with other Southerners, and the rumors about the catheter (also mentioned in the BBC source), probably ought to be included, so I'd appreciate it if you took a look. Once that's all taken care of, I'll probably be ready to pass the article. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 22:40, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the delay in these additions, WP:REALLIFE and procrastination have prevented me from working on this article. I believe I've added the above info, with the exception of changing the printing cost from 6k - 7k. I don't think this change is super necessary, and I feel like we already rely pretty heavily on the Crespino source. Thank you for your explanation of the bench trial thing, as well as your patience. All the best, AviationFreak💬 03:01, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That's a lovely essay. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 05:25, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

As explained below, I am content that the article in its present form meets the GA criteria. Thanks again for your hard work in improving this article, and I wish you the best in your future editing endeavors. Very truly yours, Extraordinary Writ (talk) 05:25, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

While this article certainly still has room for improvement, I am satisfied that it satisfies the criteria satisfactorily.

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
    No reasonable reader would have issues understanding this prose.
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
    The lead could perhaps be expanded a bit more.
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
    B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
    FA reviewers would probably prefer that the article be cited to more books and fewer online sources/newspapers. But for GA purposes, they're sufficiently reliable.
    C. It contains no original research:
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
    Earwig's tool finds no issues.
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
    The article covers all relevant bases. Some more nuanced information about this filibuster's context and legacy would perhaps be useful, but of course comprehensiveness isn't the standard.
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
    Photo appears to be in the public domain since the copyright apparently wasn't renewed.
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
    Adding alt-text is encouraged but not required.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Extraordinary Writ (talk) 05:25, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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