Talk:Steven Reiss

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I will make any changes required, if you can just direct me to any FAQ's on the subject. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ReissProfile (talk • contribs) — Preceding undated comment added 01:48, 17 December 2014

Changes needed:

You can not claim yourself as an "expert" in something on the basis of a reference to your own publication. Similarly for your having "introduced" something, or proven something. Useful neutral words are "specialized in" or "worked on" or "published on " For all of these claims, you need a reference from a third-party independent reliable source
Avoid adjectives--it makes it read like an press release
Give the full sequence of degrees and significant positions. Link to an official CV or similar source., DGG ( talk ) 05:57, 22 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]