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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 07:30, 15 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Claim my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 07:30, 15 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • refugees and bombarded Axis troop positions Link Axis.
  • Done
  • Smyshleny struck a Soviet mine on 6 March 1942 and sank Link Soviet Union.
  • Excessive, already in infobox
  • I think we should link the Soviet Union in the lead too.
  • Done.
  • Smyshleny (Russian: Смышлёный, lit. 'Clever') Unlink Russian.
  • Done
  • displacing 1,727 metric tons (1,700 long tons) at standard load Link both tonnes.
  • Done
  • and 2,279 metric tons (2,243 long tons) at deep load Link deep load.
  • Done
  • designers expected would exceed the 37-knot (69 km/h; 43 mph) speed Link knots here.
  • Done
  • Anti-aircraft defense/AA guns is overlinked.
  • Done
  • Anti-aircraft defense was provided by a pair of Add "(AA)" after Anti-aircraft.
  • Done
  • as well as four 12.7-millimeter (0.50 in) DK or DShK machine guns round the in here.
  • Done
  • No commissioned part in the body?
  • 'Accepted' in the body is one of several Russian equivalents to commissioned
  • Infobox says 8 March while the body says 7 March?
  • Done
  • Odessa is overlinked.
  • Done
  • in response to a report of Romanian destroyers leaving the port Pipe Romanian with the Kingdom of Romania.
  • Linked to a more relevant article instead
  • the German invasion of the Soviet Union, on 22 June 1941 Pipe German with Nazi Germany.
  • That would be overlinking, Germany is too well known.
  • Done.
  • No OR.

Infobox

  • "1,727 t (1,700 long tons)" Link both tonnes.
  • "54,000 shp (40,000 kW)" Link kW.
  • Both done

Images

  • File:Unidentified Project 7U in the Black Sea.jpg This is strange since when had the US soldiers in the Black Sea in WWII?
  • Likely taken by US naval attache

Sources

  • Looks good to me they're also reliable and academic.

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:32, 15 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]