Talk:Sociology of leisure/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 03:23, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

As discussed at the draft GA nom, I believe this article meets the criteria. Here are some further suggestions for improvement:

Over-linking: some terms are linked multiple times, some commonplace terms are linked unnecessarily.
Prose: good enough for GA standard, but would recommend finding someone to copy-edit
Some of the "Further reading" entries could be incorporated as references or used to expand the article
An image would be nice

Otherwise, looks good. I'm going to pass it now, but I encourage you to keep working on it to make it even better. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 03:23, 26 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]