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Nominator: De Disney (talk · contribs) 13:08, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 03:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this after work today. Wolverine XI (talk to me) 03:41, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wolverine X-eye: I just wanted to remind you of this review. Best, voorts (talk/contributions) 23:58, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@De Disney: 😬 It's the 29th...I think I will continue with this review tomorrow, unless work gets in the way, which is often the case. I apologize for being an asshole, but work has been overwhelming and has taken a huge toll on my mental health. I'm really, really sorry for dragging you down. I'll try by all means to make things right. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 20:03, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Don't worry, I understand, I can also be very busy because of work. Take as much time as you need to do this. De Disney (talk) 13:27, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Besides, it gives me enough time to fix any potential issues that you list in your review. De Disney (talk) 13:28, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Wolverine X-eye, reminder ping. -- asilvering (talk) 17:05, 7 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Please take note of the message on top of my user page. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 18:00, 7 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Wolverine X-eye, reminder ping. -- 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 16:36, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I know. Just give me 4 days. I need to complete some very important off-wiki projects. Wolverine X-eye (talk to me) 17:34, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Prose

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  • who was cursed by the evil fairy Maleficent to die from a prick from the spindle of a spinning wheel. This could be better phrased
  • Merryweather uses her gift to weaken the curse; Aurora will instead fall into a deep sleep until true love's kiss breaks the spell. Unclear
  • Still fearful, Stefan orders all the kingdom's spinning wheels burned. There should be a "be" or "to be" before burned
  • The fairies move into a forest cottage, giving up magic and living as peasants, and rename Aurora to Briar Rose. the part after "and" is ungrammatical
  • and tell her she cannot see the man again. Ungrammatical

Image review

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  • Images are appropriately licensed.

Broadness

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Source review

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