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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 00:35, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I wanna read the comic before I start the review - it won't take long. Cognissonance (talk) 00:35, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Creation and cancellation

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  • "Ellis began his run on the title with "Haunted"" – Ref. 2 (ComicsAlliance) should be put with ref. 3, as it substantiates this timeline.
  • "PR" – Link to Public Relations.
  • "reasoning that the Columbine massacre had just happened and the story's subject matter was too disturbing" – Copyedit: "reasoning that the story's subject matter was too disturbing in light of the Columbine massacre".

Aftermath

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  • "Ellis was surprised, saying it "never occurred to [him]" that DC would change its stance about the story" – The source says "It never occurred to me that a new regime would feel differently". Add the context of "Levitz would not release the book so long as he was running DC" with the "new regime" detail.

See also

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References

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  • Ref. 3 is not in line with the date format of the rest of the sources.
  • Is it normal to have the "Warning: Display title "Shoot (Hellblazer)" overrides earlier display title "Shoot (Hellblazer)"." message there or is there some way of removing it?

Overall

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As there are only minor concerns in my notes, I edited most of them myself. I will promote it once I get the answer to how the warning message could be dealt with and why the See also link is there. Cognissonance (talk) 04:39, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@TheJoebro64: Cognissonance (talk) 04:46, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Cognissonance: Thank you for reviewing this! I've responded above. JOEBRO64 11:43, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@TheJoebro64: Thanks for the help, you're all set. They're fun reads, both comic and article. Cognissonance (talk) 11:55, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]