Talk:Sherwood railway station, Perth/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:33, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Reminding you in case you have forgotten. Steelkamp (talk) 15:23, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

No, it's on my to do list, I just haven't had time to have a focused input here for a while. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:37, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

That's ok, thanks for the reply. Steelkamp (talk) 15:40, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• If "Kingsley" was a legitimate alt name, perhaps should be in bold and add a redirect to here.
• "was renamed to its present name" bit clunky repetitive.
• Can you link level crossing?
• "Two car parks with 47 bays in total are on either side of the station" always find this awkward, do you mean "There is a car park on both sides of the station, with a total of 47 bays"?
• Instead of "large" for gap, perhaps be explicit, source says 130mm I think.
• "the same year the adjacent Challis station opened" -> "as did the adjacent Challis station".
• "The station was originally named Kingsley station" repetitive.
• "due to Kingsley in the northern suburbs of Perth causing confusion." -> "to avoid confusion with Kingsley in the northern suburbs of Perth".
• No more up-to-date info on boardings than 13/14?
  • Sadly no. Figures are only ever released on an ad hoc basis.

That's all I have. Apologies for the delay. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:53, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

• Thanks, done everything. Steelkamp (talk) 16:17, 6 May 2022 (UTC)