Talk:Shea Theodore
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:53, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
Shall be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:53, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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Lead
[edit]- Perhaps include his achievements in international play in the lead? Done
Personal life
[edit]- The Province mentions that Theodore's mother works at a bank. I think it would benefit the article if this fact was mentioned Done
Youth
[edit]- "option out of the Burnaby Winter Club." - opting Done
- "He played Minor hockey" - the word highlighted in bold doesn't need to be capitalized Done
- Also, wikilink the above term for non-Ice hockey readers Done
- "he was measured at 5’10 and 142-pounds." - the convert templates would be helpful to the two figures indicated in bold Done
- "By the time he graduated from Minor hockey" - same issue as the second point I have raised in this section Done
- Wikilink 2011 Canada Winter Games since there is an article on the subject Done
- How about wikilinking the terms point and goal to the relevant articles for those unfamiliar with ice hockey terminology? Done
- "Theodore was ranked 17th amongst American skated" - skaters Done
- Wikilink 2013–14 season to 2013–14 WHL season Done
- Wikilink scout to Scout (sport) and training camp to its respective article Done
- Wikilink Norfolk Admirals to Norfolk Admirals (AHL) on its first mention and junior hockey to Junior ice hockey Done
- Wikilink the term captain to Captain (ice hockey) Done
- "He joined the Ducks American Hockey League (AHL) affiliate," - just the acronyms AHL will suffice since the full name is mentioned in previous paragraph of the article Done
Professional
[edit]- "In the 1–0 win which ended the Flames' home win streak," - repetition of the word "win" Done
- "He would later recorded his first career NHL goal " - the text in bold can be changed to would later record or later recorded Done
- "an amount he estimated suppressed 15." - 15 times. Done
- "and was praised for his skating ability." - praised by whom? Done
- "due to the contract dispute." - what contract dispute? Please elaborate further where possible since this is the first time the contract dispute is mentioned in the article Done
- "was invited to drop the Ceremonial first puck" - no need to captalize the word highlighted in bold Done
- "during the Golden Knights Hockey Fights Cancer game on November 22, 2019." - Langley Advance Times says the game happened on November 21 not November 22 Done
International play
[edit]- 2012–13 season is overlinked Done
- Wikilink Russians to Russia men's national junior ice hockey team Done
- Wikilink the second mention of Team Canada to Canada men's national junior ice hockey team Done
- "While undergoing preparations to compete," - to compete in the tournament, Done
- "after he failing a drug test" - either after failing or he failed please Done
- How about wikilinking hCG hormone to the appropriate article for those unfamiliar with it Done
- I believe it would help to wikilink the term blueline to the relevant article Done
References
[edit]- References 10, 25 and 34 are missing the authors of the respective articles Done
- Does #34 have an author?
- If referring to the former Last Word of Sports reference that was deleted than yes 12:33, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 17 should include .com in the work field to maintain consistency with other sources Done
- Reference 20 is missing Associated Press as the agency Done
- Reference 23 is missing the author and The Canadian Press as the agency Done
- Reference 24 is missing the date it was accessed Done
- Reference 26 should not be in all capital letters per MOS:ALLCAPS Done
- References 19 & 39 is missing The Canadian Press in the agency field Done
- What makes Reference 34 reliable? Removed
Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 07:39, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96, Thanks for the speedy review. I believe I have made all the necessary changes. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 10:51, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. I have made one minor change to the article. MWright96 (talk) 12:33, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
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