Talk:She's Done it Again/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:23, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 15:23, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
Here's what I found:
- " and featured the leading players, Anna Rosemond and Frank H. Crane." rm comma; same for later in the article when this is noted.
- "Bowers' also credits Blair Smith as the cameraman." rm apostrophe
- " and joined in the autumn of 1909 and in their first year of productions" tweak to "...autumn of 1909, their first year..."
- "Crane's was the first leading man" Crane was
- "by Ray Norton to support that it a good comedy" that it is a
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 15:38, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
- Fixes done @Wizardman:. Thanks for reviewing. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:51, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
- No problem; looks good, article passes. Wizardman 16:07, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
- Fixes done @Wizardman:. Thanks for reviewing. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:51, 7 February 2015 (UTC)