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GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:23, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 15:23, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Here's what I found:

  • " and featured the leading players, Anna Rosemond and Frank H. Crane." rm comma; same for later in the article when this is noted.
  • "Bowers' also credits Blair Smith as the cameraman." rm apostrophe
  • " and joined in the autumn of 1909 and in their first year of productions" tweak to "...autumn of 1909, their first year..."
  • "Crane's was the first leading man" Crane was
  • "by Ray Norton to support that it a good comedy" that it is a

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 15:38, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Fixes done @Wizardman:. Thanks for reviewing. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:51, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
No problem; looks good, article passes. Wizardman 16:07, 7 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]