Talk:Sexy Mama

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:22, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will start this soon. JAGUAR 14:22, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"The single received generally positive feedback from contemporary music critics" - why contemporary? Unless there is something I'm missing out (as I'm not too familiar with music articles) I'm not sure if it sounds right for something that has come out within the last few years. If I'm wrong then I won't mention this in later reviews!
"who favored the track as a one of Iyanya's best song" - favoured (since it's Nigerian)
"It was digitally released on 6 February 2013 through Made Men Music Group" - might be worth explaining that this is a label
"The visual commences with the two artists standing in front of a white backdrop while several female dancers appear sporadically through the use of digital and animated effects; because of this, the video itself was nominated" - the sentence should be split in between "effects" and "because"
No dead links
No dab links

On hold until all are clarified! JAGUAR 14:54, 30 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]