Talk:Senegal at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lede

• "although finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom." - although he finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom.

Background

• Winter Olympics is a dab link
• "fellow skier Leyti Seck was the national's sole athlete" - missing team in between "national's" and "sole"
• "Seck, a Germany-born athlete" - German-born
• "not finishing in the Men's slalom or giant slalom." - but not finishing in the men's slalom or giant slalom

Alpine Skiing

• Nothing wrong here

References

• All the text is supported by the references
• Sports Reference should only be linked on the first instance
• Paris Match, Eurosport Vancouver Sun, Reuters and Associated Press need to be wikilinked
• Reference 5 needs The Sunday Telegraph as its work
• no dead links

On hold for the issues. Good work! MWright96 (talk) 18:21, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thanks for reviewing, I've made the changes you listed. Miyagawa (talk) 19:23, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

Nice. Promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:37, 17 October 2016 (UTC)