Talk:Senegal at the 2010 Winter Olympics

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Review: October 17, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Senegal at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 17:30, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lede

"although finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom." - although he finished ahead of fellow African Samir Azzimani of Morocco in the giant slalom.

Background

Winter Olympics is a dab link
"fellow skier Leyti Seck was the national's sole athlete" - missing team in between "national's" and "sole"
"Seck, a Germany-born athlete" - German-born
"not finishing in the Men's slalom or giant slalom." - but not finishing in the men's slalom or giant slalom

Alpine Skiing

Nothing wrong here

References

All the text is supported by the references
Sports Reference should only be linked on the first instance
Paris Match, Eurosport Vancouver Sun, Reuters and Associated Press need to be wikilinked
Reference 5 needs The Sunday Telegraph as its work
no dead links

On hold for the issues. Good work! MWright96 (talk) 18:21, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for reviewing, I've made the changes you listed. Miyagawa (talk) 19:23, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nice. Promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 19:37, 17 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]