Talk:Sekula Drljević/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 07:24, 6 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 07:24, 6 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

The lede seems awfully detailed; it should summarize the main body, but it's not really much of a summary.

I've simplified it.

Do you have any further info on his family? Did he have any kids?

Details on the personal lives of people like Drljević are usually rather hazy since it was the communists who won the war, not the nationalists/fascists. The communists promoted their own people during communist Yugoslavia and many detailed biographies were written about them, not the people from the other side. It comes as no surprise then that Google searches don't turn up much about his personal life other than he was married and that his wife was killed alongside him.

Do you know how he was discovered in the camp?

The sources only mention that he and his wife were found and murdered in November 1945.

External links and DABs good.
Photo of Drljevic needs a US PD tag and what makes the photo of the assassination attempt PD anywhere?

I've added a tag indicating that the Drljević photo was public domain in its country of publication before 1996. The assassination photo is PD in Serbia and I'll see if it's PD in the US since its author is unknown. 23 editor (talk) 17:04, 11 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The PD-old license was inappropriate because the photographer is unknown, so I replaced it with a PD-1996 which should apply. You might consider adding an infobox summarizing his life, but it's not a requirement.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:19, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]