Talk:Seasons (Ayumi Hamasaki song)

Swear!

Swea! this is the most beautiful song in my life!! I listen to this song everyday. No words can describe... --back to goguryeo 09:21, 5 October 2007 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Seasons (Ayumi Hamasaki song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:46, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I am Carbrera, and I'll be reviewing this article for possible good article submission.

Full review coming very soon. Carbrera (talk) 01:46, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

Infobox

• The caption isn't needed since it's the same on all formats

Lead

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• I would add "single" before trilogy so readers aren't confused

Paragraph 2

• You list "J-pop" in the infobox, but "Japanese pop" in the lead, so make both of them the same please
• Songwriting is one word
• Change to "...making it Hamasaki's best selling single."

Paragraph 3

• Nada

Background and release

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• The hidden text isn't necessary here; if you find it necessary, I would avoid shouting
• Remove the "s" after seconds in the audio sample description

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• I would switch around this paragraph and the first one; I don't know, it flows better in my opinion–what are your thoughts on this?
• Instead of "describes Hamasaki's future", I would say "predicts Hamasaki's future"

Paragraph 3

• "making videos" → "making-of videos"
• Change to "The CD and digital cover sleeve have an image" please

Critical reception

• Again, songwriting is one word
• The third sentence uses the word "singled" but I'm not sure what it's trying to say/what it means
• 100% of the votes? Are you sure? Does that mean every person who voted picked this song?

Commercial performance

• Add a topic sentence stating that "Seasons" was a success please
• Remove "at" after "Vogue/Far Away/Seasons" reached..."
• The third and second to last sentence should use a semicolon to separate instead of a period (full stop)

Music video

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• Outtake is one word

Synopsis

• Superimposed is also one word
• Change "with a video of two children" to "with a scene of two children" to reduce the amount of "videos" in that sentence

Live performances and other appearances

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• Are there available links to any of the tours you mentioned in this paragraph?

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• Same with above, are there any available links for the concert performances that you mentioned? Add if applicable please
• You can add the years to the concert tours in parentheses after the tour name please (I would highly recommend this, especially since some tours last over several years.)

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• List the actual albums instead of saying "The list is:..." like you did in my other review comments from previous articles you nominated

Credits and personnel

• The first column (if odd) should have the extra bullet point
• I don't think "Avex Trax" needs to be included here, so if you remove it, it would also take care of the above problem/comment

Track listing

• Pluralize the title and add "formats" so it reads as "Track listings and formats"

Charts and certifications

Certification

• What does it mean to be certified "Million"?
• If million is a certification, you need to pluralize the section subtitle to "Certifications"

References

• Like with the rest of my reviews, please double check that only one link is provided for each publisher/website/etc. Thanks!

End of GA Review:

Great work yet again! I will put it on hold so you can make any changes. Thanks! Carbrera (talk) 04:40, 16 April 2016 (UTC)

@Carbrera: Done and dusted! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 05:23, 18 April 2016 (UTC)