Talk:Saving Private Ryan (soundtrack)/GA2
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 16:57, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- The album cover needs an alt image description; please add one
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- Link "John Williams" in the infobox's "Producer" parameter please
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Lead
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[edit]- Reword: "Recorded in Symphony Hall, Boston, Massachusetts, the scores were performed by the Boston Symphony Orchestra and feature vocals from the Tanglewood Festival Chorus on two of the ten compositions." --> "Recorded in Symphony Hall, Boston, Massachusetts, the scores were performed by the Boston Symphony Orchestra, with two of the ten compositions featuring vocals from the Tanglewood Festival Chorus." please
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 2
[edit]- I believe you neglected to mention that the "Best Instrumental Composition Written for a Motion Picture or for Television" award is a Grammy award, so please add that so the statement is clarified
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- I would add "Soundtrack opener" or even just "Opener" before "Hymn to the Fallen"
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Background
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- Add Saving Private Ryan's release year in parentheses after the title of the movie please (in this case, it would read Saving Private Ryan (1998).[2][3]"
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- Also include the release years for movies Close Encounters of the Third Kind and Schindler's List please (also in parentheses of course.)
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 3
[edit]- Provide a link to "Military drums" please
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- Reword: "The two tracks entitled "Hymn to the Fallen" are the only two that feature any sort of vocals and bookend the album.[5][7]" --> ""Hymn to the Fallen" and its reprise are the only two tracks that feature any sort of vocals and bookend the album.[5][7]" please
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- Provide a link to "AllMusic" please (in both the paragraph and the reception box to the right of the article.)
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Please add the release year for Flags of Our Fathers in parentheses as well (in this case, the year is 2006.)
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Paragraph 4
[edit]- "chosen by fan vote." --> "chosen by fan votes."
- Fixed. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Other comments
[edit]- Please add a "Release history" box immediately following the "Credits" section please; for an example, feel free to look at This Is What the Truth Feels Like
- Done. Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
End of GA Review:
[edit]A very good article! I will be placing it on hold for seven days to allow for any changes or corrections to be made to it. Good luck and thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 23:22, 14 June 2016 (UTC).
- Fixed all these! Thanks for the review man, I appreciate it! Disc Wheel (T + C) 03:03, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.