Talk:Sasha Grey/Archive 2
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Wikilinks
@Steam5 and Bilorv: There are some stylistic differences between contributors to this page about wikilinks. Apparently all agree that excessive wikilinking is wrong and/or ugly, there are some -4 edit summaries. In two cases I tend to disagree:
- Clearly wikilinks ending up in another section of the same page are slightly odd. OTOH these wikilinks will continue to work if somebody decides to expand Neü Sex into a separate article again, or creates a proper page with cover images etc. for The Juliette Society. Some critics say that it's better than the 50 Shades of Grey, this could realistically happen. [[#Books|Neü Sex]] instead of [[Neü Sex]] would be worse, nobody suggested it.
- work=[[…]] instead of work=… is a related issue: Readers should see in the popup that the referenced work has an enwiki page, and therefore is by definition notable. In all references of the same work, same idea as using authorlink=… in all references of the same author. Limiting these wikilinks to some first reference is a maintenance headache, references are moved around, removed, re-inserted, etc. all the time.
Remotely related: Obviously all titles of works should be in italics on this page, even if the title is a wikilink. For Quit I just picked ''Quit'' ([[quit smoking]]) instead of ''[[Smoking cessation|Quit]]'', rendered as Quit (quit smoking) instead of Quit. Matter of taste, please fix it if you don't like it. Some magazines like Penthouse and Playboy are also wikilinked in italics, others are only wikilinked, and there's no obvious (for me) rule why folks prefer what on this page. –84.46.52.134 (talk) 15:24, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
- Linking to e.g. The Juliette Society is okay on another page, but not part of the same page, as it forces the browser to reload the same page (an unnecessary delay for those with slow internet connections). If an article is created at The Juliette Society, then (and only then) links on this page can be added. I'm agreed with your second point. — Bilorv (he/him) (talk) 18:00, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
- Normally I assume that my connections are the worst, from ISDN when others had DSL, to UMTS (mobile broadband) or "free WiFi" today, when others have LTE or FTTH. But yes, a redirect can be expensive, "https" killed ordinary caching. –84.46.52.134 (talk) 18:47, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
- Meanwhile… all magazines and titles are in italics. –84.46.52.134 (talk) 19:27, 21 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Aia94: If you have another plan please explain what it is, I've reset your 6 double quotes to 6 italics for now. –84.46.52.233 (talk) 01:34, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- Apparently accepted. –84.46.52.48 (talk) 16:13, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
Grey vs. Gray
Okay, I knew that there were at least two inspirations for Grey, certainly not related to the much later 50 shades. It's in my 3rd reserve ammo depot chrome://bookmarks/Bookmarks bar/.plan/ToDo/SG, because "no picture/video" is unsuited—or rather, boring—for sharing on G+, LinkedIn, or blogger in the 2010s.[1] Figuring out what I thought about this source, it cannot be archived, WayBack as client gets an error (400).
That an artist widely recognized as nerd ("el cerebro del sexo") has a spelling error—intentional or otherwise—in her nickname never made sense for me. She mostly sticked to the Dorian Gray legend in public. Clear case of "gotcha" in the paused GA review, I didn't expect some kind of expert in the Fields of Grey, blog label FoG.[2]
Of course I now have to add the other legend. All good spells have many facets, at least two reasons for Grey are perfectly fine, and Sasha Gray is anyway already listed as alias in the infobox. –84.46.52.208 (talk) 10:09, 18 March 2019 (UTC)
TMZ and the restraining order
@Steam5, Iamcuriousblue, and Bilorv: FYI, I've put TMZ on the BLP/Noticeboard. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 00:48, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Iamcuriousblue: The recent GA review kind of forced engagement back in, but I think it is not too bad, Grey used the word "fiancé" at different times. I still hope to nail WP:RS/P#TMZ (yellow: caution, instead of red: stop) on BLP/N. –84.46.52.48 (talk) 14:12, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
- FWIW one contributor on BLP/N wrote about TMZ that No "celebrity gossip" news is ever "reliable", the entry is now archived. –84.46.53.186 (talk) 02:57, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
Lotta continua
Fun stuff not related to the GA review, but now might be a good time to discuss it: d:Q2709 (I can type that Interwikilink without checking) has a motto "Lotta continua" with an Italian reference. She actually used it (instead of "regards" or similar) in mails, IIRC she also had a company with that name. –84.46.52.208 (talk) 18:18, 18 March 2019 (UTC)
- Implemented (end of lede) with Italian source. –84.46.52.26 (talk) 07:18, 20 March 2019 (UTC)
- Now in #Personal life, not wikilinked, Lotta Continua doesn't express Never surrender. –84.46.52.233 (talk) 17:29, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- She has MAS. LC. on her Twitter profile, and LC is exactly what lotta continua says, and agrees with itwiki, therefore "I dare" wikilink it now. For MAS I'm not sure what it is, but Memento Audere Semper would fit (found on it.wiktionary.org/wiki/MAS - eyes wide shut for the fascist connotations.) –84.46.52.225 (talk) 00:59, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
Batch2
- Clumsy "somewhere in between", yes, but Kinsey scale has no grey, and I have no better idea how to express this. Actually it's a verbatim quote, but she said straight and gay instead of heterosexual and homosexual. Willing to replace this by her plain English if desired... –84.46.53.4 (talk) 16:24, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- Fixed by Bilorv. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- I Melt With You, she played a minor role, reviews of the film belong on I Melt with You (film). I've added the wikilinked director, apparently they both like Nine Inch Nails and (from the NYC Pendu crowd) Chelsea Wolfe.
- Shrouded Corpse Bathing While Hip-Shaking: No reviews apart from the Indonesian reference, even the English title is unclear (IMDb uses Membunu: murder).
- Would You Rather (film) covered by Rotten critics consensus and on its wikilinked page. We have the quote of Amy played by Grey in the Rotten reference.
- China Test Girls: No wikilink, no entry on Rotten, the reference is the best available background info.
- Saints Row: That's two wikilinked video games, reviews belong on the relevant pages, she's only voicing one of the major protagonists in these games.
- Added THQ interview video as reference. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- Durch die Nacht mit ...: That's a documentary, some Rotten Tomatoes links (this + two others for Grey) lead nowhere. I'm aware of one German review roughly stating that the two persons (Sasha + a lady from Hamburg) were very different, the German introvert kind of overwhelmed by the more extrovert Grey. Is that interesting?
- Added Herbertstrasse, Hamburg, nightlife, good enough. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- Entourage: That should be handled on the wikilinked 7th season list. It isn't, but I've also not seen any significant review about Grey's role apart from episode summaries. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 18:04, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- 7th season got fresh + rotten tomatoes. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- aTelecine: There are six pages for major works of this band, detailed descriptions on who did what when belong on these pages. She was a co-founder of the band, and in his post-split interview Cinnamon claimed that he did most of the later work. She got the dog. That dog is arguably relevant (on Personal life) if desired, it has its own Twitter etc. accounts, even a (dead) YouTube channel.
- No pets/cats/dogs on BLPs per Talk:Emma Blackery#Missing info. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- We have better sources for her contributions to ex-TG (vocals covering Nico) etc. (mostly vocals), and detailed info about the Consequences of love for Death in Vegas (co-producer, video director, lyrics, singer.)
- Richard Fearless wikilinked, Talk:Death in Vegas 2006…2018 rewritten. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- Some parts of the music will make more sense when Draft:Pendu Sound Recordings replaces the red link, it's often the same NYC Pendu sound crowd including Grey since aTelecine. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 18:32, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- 2 months old draft added to 5 WikiProjects. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- The Equal Pay Day video "controversial", that was a WP:SYNTH by me based on the title of the first reference, and I removed it after your earlier observation and after checking that the content doesn't justify this adjective. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 18:52, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- Is there any more on Grey's political beliefs? Of course, dozens of Twitter messages, but not in MSM as far as I recall that. One earlier op-ed (she was the author) is covered in Personal life. I think she'd be a good journalist if she wanted to, but apparently she wants to be a photographer (cf. Neü Sex and her instagram photos.) Completely un-encyclopedic at the moment. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 19:08, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- After adding a new source to #Activism with "more than only Sanders" I've removed it again,,[3] in essence it quoted the old source, and the reliability of mofopolitics.com based on only two other enwiki uses is unclear. WikiLinking Lotta Continua would be unwise. –84.46.52.75 (talk) 13:35, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- If it's not shown to be particularly significant then there may actually be no need to mention it at all. Just a thought... -- Begoon 14:02, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- If you're talking about the motto, I think it's significant, see #Lotta continua below and the three references for it on d:Q2709. Only a wikilink could be misleading, Continuous Struggle is a lousy translation, in German it would be Der Kampf geht weiter, English The fight goes on, in the direction of the Churchill quote in Fool's Overture.[4] –84.46.52.75 (talk) 07:24, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- One of the greatest tracks in music history. I saw the live Supertramp tour back in the day. No, really I just meant her support for Sanders, the content in the reference seems to be just
"(Sasha is a Bernie supporter)"
in a long interview, but I have no strong feelings on its inclusion or not. -- Begoon 07:37, 24 March 2019 (UTC)- Looking at her Twitter today she's following him or at least re-tweeted his info about the Yemen war resolution (2019-04-04). –84.46.52.225 (talk) 01:29, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
- One of the greatest tracks in music history. I saw the live Supertramp tour back in the day. No, really I just meant her support for Sanders, the content in the reference seems to be just
- If you're talking about the motto, I think it's significant, see #Lotta continua below and the three references for it on d:Q2709. Only a wikilink could be misleading, Continuous Struggle is a lousy translation, in German it would be Der Kampf geht weiter, English The fight goes on, in the direction of the Churchill quote in Fool's Overture.[4] –84.46.52.75 (talk) 07:24, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- If it's not shown to be particularly significant then there may actually be no need to mention it at all. Just a thought... -- Begoon 14:02, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- After adding a new source to #Activism with "more than only Sanders" I've removed it again,,[3] in essence it quoted the old source, and the reliability of mofopolitics.com based on only two other enwiki uses is unclear. WikiLinking Lotta Continua would be unwise. –84.46.52.75 (talk) 13:35, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- The widths of the Award table are still very out of proportion: They are perfect for me tested with two browsers, the first column widths are all determined by the arguably worst cases. The last column co-starring gets by definition the rest, forcing it into a smaller width would break it for me. I now specified column widths (percents) in the header, but as this has almost no effect for me I have no idea what it does for you. Wild guess, your browser window is far wider than 1600 pixels. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 19:22, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- IMDb only used as source for their idiosyncratic "Membunu: Murder" title, this source always was only about their title not matching the title in the Indonesian source, explained above; and in the original edit summary by me added + reviewed months ago, please check [5] and the next three edits for the background. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 19:45, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- Pointless reference replaced by wikilink. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:59, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- Genesis 2009 vs. 2008: Both, #1 2009, #6 2008, possibly more TBD on demand. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 20:11, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- Australians queen of the night reneeruin.com is used as source on five pages including Sasha Grey, as noted in the edit summary. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 20:28, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- Resolved– archived RS/N inquiry. –84.46.53.95 (talk) 02:37, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
- The original summary mixed assessments nailed it, excluding one now removed source about another film: I've restored the good status-quo-antea for the four remaining GFE critics, we made it worse. There are now two other critics (actually three, you mangled two into one, I removed the extra, because I can't see the Orlando Weekly page anymore) covered by The Week, and another review by Violet Blue. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 20:47, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
- I found the G4tv video as archive.org/details/g4tv.com-video38325 and used this as archiveurl=…, another source for "grey" based on the Kinsey scale. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 21:05, 22 March 2019 (UTC)
Awards
I've tagged Adultcon with {{multiple issues|
. For the AFGW awards I found a "Best Orgy Scene" matching the Fashionistas Safado: The Challenge, we already had that as AVN award in the table; I simply added a row for another award. The AFGW award for the Best Blowjob Series went to "Gangbang My Face" (Evil Angel) with Sasha Grey as only one of many other actresses in part 1, not unlike the Fashionistas, but an award for a series, not a scene, therefore I didn't add that. –84.46.53.181 (talk) 03:02, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
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- The Adultcon "award" 2007 is BS: Adultcon tried this once in 2007. Grey did not get any of their awards, and "Adultcon Vice President Renaud West estimated the attendance at 'maybe 100,' adding, 'It was not well-attended, but the right people were there.'"[6] She was listed as one of the top 20 hardcore porn actresses, and I had to fix the XBIZ
{{cite press}}
EL on Adultcon with WayBack to check at least this irrelevant fact.[7] Maybe it was a consolation price, far below any standard for Sasha Grey after 2007. –84.46.52.115 (talk) 12:47, 31 March 2019 (UTC)- Adultcon 2007 "top 20 honor roll" removed, 16 back to 15 awards. –84.46.53.186 (talk) 01:22, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
- Now
{{multiple issues|
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Exactly four enwiki articles mention TLARAW: Sasha Grey#Awards matching the List of awards and nominations received by Sasha Grey, Mason (director), and (unsourced) Wasteland (film). I think the two sex toy awards could be also removed as not notable, unless we find some source that she was involved in the engineering or at least present at the award ceremonies. –84.46.53.186 (talk) 02:44, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
- FYI: Talk:List of awards and nominations received by Sasha Grey#TLARAW. –84.46.52.225 (talk) 02:00, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
- TLARAW sex toys removed per Special:Diff/891212178/891212307, the WikiProject Awards is still on attention=yes for a third opinion and one last TLARAW award for Mason (director). –84.46.52.219 (talk) 05:54, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
Pendu Sound Recordings
FYI, the last red link on Sasha Grey can be now resolved by Draft:Pendu Sound Recordings, please kick it if you can, it's one of several possible showstoppers for a GA review request.
Other issues: All references have to be checked and fixed with WAYBACK if they don't work as expected. The #Activism section should cover Equal Pay Day and maybe Planned Parenthood, unless that ends up in a hopeless tangle with donations from selling her merch. The relevance of more than 1.2M Twitter followers is unclear (for me), feedback requested on enwiki doesn't care how many friends you have. –84.46.53.62 (talk) 15:36, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
— unsigned image to the right added by 84.46.52.217 (talk) 12:54, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
- GFE 2009 beats Broken 2007 for #Acting. –84.46.52.115 (talk) 11:08, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
- Something about Sasha Grey in art and culture as pop icon or similar is also missing, maybe as new section under #Personal life mentioning Richard Phillips, Richard Prince etc.[8] Not sure how to tackle this: –84.46.53.251 (talk) 06:51, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
- Richard Phillips (American painter) covered in #Appearances (major parts of this stub are about Sasha Grey.) –84.46.53.245 (talk) 15:10, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
- Ditto for the Matteo Bittanti page linked above, intentional red link here, a teacher + researcher at the California College of the Arts mentioned on 14 enwiki pages should be notable. –84.46.53.245 (talk) 15:38, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
- That didn't make it, self-published source by Matteo Bittanti not quoted anywhere else as far as Googlebot can tell it for queries Duellanti 2010 "sasha grey" or "Matteo Bittanti" "sasha grey".<shrug />, yet another demo why I considered "patrol" or "review" rights (not here) as honour (checking contributions by other editors), and disliked "auto-patrol" rights (because it bypassed 4 eyes for my own contributions), GB fan –84.46.53.245 (talk) 22:28, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
- Twitter followers (no matter what the number is) are irrelevant without WP:42 reference (consensus). –84.46.53.3 (talk) 00:31, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
- This edit covers Equal Pay Day, seven years + one day too late (I didn't bother to find a source for March 8, 2012, assuming a PEBKAC on my side). Oddly this edit is tagged as possible BLP vandalism. Nice, if that accelerates the review here, but stupid, if it distracts reviewers from more urgent issues. So far I figured out that this tag is always triggered by YouTube videos as references, now I wonder if that feature is implemented as "using the word 'video' on a BLP", which would be extremely minimalistic. –84.46.53.128 (talk) 07:15, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
- Planned Parenthood added to #Activism, there are just too many good references to drop it silently here, only because I consider any merch as abomination. –84.46.53.128 (talk) 09:54, 9 March 2019 (UTC)
- Instead of sources for Richard Prince I found Julião Sarmento and more important thejuliettesociety.com with a better bio than on her home page.T-39h –84.46.52.207 (talk) 16:07, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
- Two references incl. Dazed should do for A4 (2010), just in case here's 3rd reference:[9] –84.46.52.207 (talk) 19:04, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
- Chris Hanley was a dead end, or I didn't grok it. –84.46.52.207 (talk) 20:55, 12 March 2019 (UTC)
- All references checked: 57 revisions started on March 14, 22:17 PDT (2019-03-15 05:17Z); now nominated as good article in category Media and drama. Total changes since 2018-12-09: 315 revisions from 43,870 bytes with 96 references to 62,186 bytes with 134 references. –84.46.52.92 (talk) 19:01, 15 March 2019 (UTC)
- FYI: Talk:Playboy/Archives/2019#Sasha Grey. –84.46.52.92 (talk) 08:44, 16 March 2019 (UTC)
- Fixed, now listed as celebrity on Playboy, and because Playboy is already wikilinked in the body no further #See also list is required at the moment (Grey is on two Playboy lists.) –84.46.52.28 (talk) 14:51, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
- And Talk:Pop icon#Emma Peel + Sasha Grey. –84.46.52.48 (talk) 15:38, 28 March 2019 (UTC)
- Updated status from 2018-12-09, old 43,870 bytes with 96 references, new 71,545 bytes with 153 references.
Updated status (before review), was 62,186 bytes with 134 references, now 71,545 bytes with 153 references. –84.46.52.103 (talk) 17:09, 20 March 2019 (UTC) - Updated status (before review), was 62,186 bytes with 134 references, now 73,113 bytes with 155 references. –84.46.53.4 (talk) 01:06, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- Updated status (before review), was 62,186 bytes with 134 references, now 76,072 bytes with 163 references. –84.46.53.181 (talk) 03:35, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- Double fault: Pendu Sound noticed dark ambient and "death-dub".[108], 2nd Pendu red link four lines below the 1st has to be unlinked. Reference [108] is a dupe of [12], all-caps in [12] is ugly, otherwise it can be recycled.
Unforced error: the 2011 video game Saints Row: The Third, which was released in November 2011, unsourced + irrelevant release month, for Linux it was allegedly 2016. –84.46.52.217 (talk) 13:23, 29 March 2019 (UTC)- Minor nits fixed, the major stuff noted in the next paragraph follows in April. –84.46.52.44 (talk) 18:22, 31 March 2019 (UTC)
- I think I never tried to find a review for book II instead of III, AXS:[10] Same author, same site, 2016 (fresh for S.G.), about music:[11] Modeling for Interview (magazine) Germany:[12]. In #Awards wikilinking Babysitters (adult film) makes sense (redirect to section, won in a film category), it should be also added in #Career near her 25th AVN awards. –84.46.52.217 (talk) 19:22, 29 March 2019 (UTC)
- All added / done: –84.46.53.186 (talk) 10:57, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
- Potentially good hypocritedesign.com source about Richard Phillips' short film still discussed (RS or not) at the TEAHOUSE. –84.46.53.186 (talk) 12:30, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
- Meanwhile archived, I've added HyDe (Trial and Error), 2nd use as source on enwiki. –84.46.53.140 (talk) 10:21, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
- I've removed two WP:RS/N#HuffPost contributors sources, one reference replaced by a Pendu source copied from the draft. –84.46.53.140 (talk) 10:31, 15 April 2019 (UTC)
- A total of four HuffPost/artinfo removed with extreme prejudice. –84.46.52.110 (talk) 14:32, 20 April 2019 (UTC)
Fallout
ToDo: Find a RS for the Consequences of Love in Mission: Impossible – Fallout, cf. M:I - Fallout - Nightclub Song BASS REMIX on YouTube. Maybe simplify the current convoluted allmusic reference credits with [13] (2016). –84.46.53.188 (talk) 13:26, 19 April 2019 (UTC)
- EL2REF Vice done. If you plan to see her in the former Denver city hall check out their dress code, no refunds. –84.46.52.110 (talk) 08:14, 21 April 2019 (UTC)
- DJ Harvey at Grand Palais added. The source what-song.com is used in more than 20 articles and lists Consequences of love.
Black Licorice
If Black Licorice at IMDb is correct the red link China Test Girls on the page has to be fixed. It's definitely the same movie, IMDb has China Test Girls in the AKA section of its release notes. Not checking what happened here on this page in July today, but it is easy to guess with the red link: Thanks to the GOCE folks, I still plan a new GA attempt "soon".™ –84.46.52.37 (talk) 03:31, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
Raise your flag
FYI, GOCE request, the last missing issue for the 2nd GA nomination. NP Björk, Declare Independence (listen on YouTube.) –84.46.53.150 (talk) 06:30, 1 July 2019 (UTC)
- Updated N/A link to official YT, an obscure "one little indian" vs. Björk issue. –84.46.52.229 (talk) 03:20, 11 December 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks to 50.36.82.55, finally some kind of 3O for the cats. –84.46.53.211 (talk) 11:37, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks to Baffle gab1978. I restored the Sex Week at Yale detail, because there was no other Sex Week at Yale after her appearance as expert. Three days ce, was it the size of this article, or should I be embarrassed? –84.46.53.211 (talk) 12:44, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
- Rough consensus "actress" matching the infobox occupation + WP:SHORTDESC + d:Q2709 + Talk:Sasha Grey/Archive 1#Model vs. writer. IP edits without edit summary should be summarily rejected. –84.46.53.211 (talk) 14:25, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
Copy from #Pendu Sound Recordings, because the bot will archive this old section soon:
- Updated status from 2018-12-09, old 43,870 bytes with 96 references, new 71,545 bytes with 153 references.
- Updated status (since 12/09/18), was 43,870 bytes with 96 references, now 82,624 bytes with 185 references.
Let's see if that is now good enough, @Bilorv: renominated. –84.46.53.211 (talk) 15:02, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
WayBack fun stuff
WayBack archived Grey's myspace incl. her blog.[15] An enwiki spam block hates the blog-URLs, but it's nice to X-check some facts,[16] rescue DP pictures, etc. On this here unusable blog I found the French indie film "life" (2009), removed here, because no RS existed. Photos showing that she helped to design some sex toys also exist, the meanwhile removed "toy awards" were no complete BS. –84.46.52.237 (talk) 17:48, 6 May 2019 (UTC)
- There are at least 8 "Attack of the Show" G4TV clips with Sasha Grey on WayBack. –84.46.52.192 (talk) 14:13, 12 May 2019 (UTC)
- Exactly 11, two already covered by older YouTube uploads. While at it I've "un-archived" the complete set, and "upgraded" three "HD FLV" (Flash video VP6 codec) to WebM (VP8). Two trailers in these Attack of the Show! videos might be interesting (GFE + Saints Row: The Third), and the Sexpo videos are funny, but sadly WayBack doesn't have the two hours G4 documentary at IMDb. –84.46.53.163 (talk) 17:50, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
- Obscure info, "LA factory girls" had an email address (maybe not as dead as Google+), Grey Art LLC founded by Sasha Grey Inc. and Low Art LLC had an address, there's an odd discogs entry for Sasha Grey Inc. as record label for a German audio edition of The Juliette Society, a TJS Tumblr, a web domain for a 2009 Grey Art adult film project still redirected to sashagrey.com, and a fresh Sasha Grey™ for fashion.[17] –84.46.52.167 (talk) 10:31, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
- Sasha Grey Inc. should be mentioned in the article, maybe with the ™ info as source, but I'm not sure where it fits: The intro of #Career is exclusively about 2006…2009, the #Background is actually #Early life—maybe that section should be renamed—and #Personal life is unsuited for business info.
Adding it to #Modeling could work, near the Allure interview 2018, because the ™ source covers 2006…2017, but at the moment I'm lost how to put this into one short English statement. –84.46.53.163 (talk) 18:34, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
- Sasha Grey Inc. should be mentioned in the article, maybe with the ™ info as source, but I'm not sure where it fits: The intro of #Career is exclusively about 2006…2009, the #Background is actually #Early life—maybe that section should be renamed—and #Personal life is unsuited for business info.
Obscure "blpo" lists
Grey is listed on various more or less obscure lists, not all of them wikilinked in the article. It's a BLP policy issue if these lists contain obsolete claims such as "pornographic actress" (skipping the general "actress") or atheist (instead of the far better sourced "existentialist", which is no proper subset of "atheist"). I don't think that we should add all these lists to #See also. Maybe we can collect the known lists here:
- Sex symbols
- Gay, lesbian or bisexual
- Bisexual people (G–M)
- Porn performers by decade
- Crossover
- Penthouse Pets
- Playboy 2000–2009
- Playboy 2010-2019
- Celebrities on Entourage
- Premature obituaries
- Bernie Sanders 2016
- People from California
- Polish Americans
- Greek Americans
- Irish Americans
- Irish American actors
- Irish American musician
- English Americans
As "DEnglish" contributor I'm amazed how enwiki ignores various "lessons learned from 1933-45". –84.46.53.107 (talk) 18:04, 3 January 2020 (UTC)
- updated –84.46.52.205 (talk) 09:05, 5 January 2020 (UTC)
- sorted –84.46.52.173 (talk) 17:53, 6 January 2020 (UTC)
- +pets –84.46.52.170 (talk) 00:22, 21 January 2020 (UTC)
- updated –84.46.52.225 (talk) 11:35, 26 January 2020 (UTC)
Layout
The layout of this article sucks, ten or more h2 sections are a red flag for me, at the moment we are at eleven h2 sections. The unclear #Background h2 could be an #Early life h3 in a new #Life h2 together with the #Personal life (as is, h3 instead of h2) and the #Activism (h3 as is, but not under #Career).
The unclear #Media Recognition h3 under #Career h2 could belong to the #Reception h2, but actually it is about her 2006…2011 career as porn star, maybe this section should be renamed to #Adult industry, after all she was not only a porn star in this period, but also a director, and founded at least one model agency LA factory girls. –84.46.52.173 (talk) 16:58, 6 January 2020 (UTC)
- "Background" renamed to #Early life as on many BLPs: This small step does not solve the "eleven h2" issue. –84.46.53.116 (talk) 16:29, 20 January 2020 (UTC)
- The #Reception was a paragraph in #Personal life, I moved it back. Likewise #Activism was a sub-section of #Personal life and doesn't belong to #Career, also moved back. Of course "personal" vs. "career" isn't always clear cut for an influencer aka celebrity, but the #Activism in one set with #Books + #Music + #Acting + #Modeling was just odd. The unclear #Media coverage is now sorted chronologically into #Model (Richardson, Penthouse, Playboy) and #Career (Sexpo etc.) –84.46.53.138 (talk) 07:28, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
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