Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2020/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will try to start this review tonight, depending on what's going on. --K. Peake 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
Surround "Freaky!" with double speech marks
The second time in 11 years part is not mentioned in the body
Pipe final to Eurovision Song Contest 2008#Grand final
"Due to the 2020 coronavirus pandemic in Europe," → "Due to the coronavirus pandemic in Europe during 2020," with the pipe
"subsequently took part in" → "was subsequently an entry for" because the song itself doesn't take part
"during Eurovision: Europe Shine a Light that" → "during the former of the three that"

Done with some minor wording changes. Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Background

"ten times since their" → "10 times since their" per MOS:NUM
"The nation's next four entries" → "The nation's next four entries,"
"by Jessika feat." → "by Jessika featuring"
"for 2018 did not" → "for 2018, did not"
"best placing to this point" → "best placing up to 2020" per this being a while after the opening sentence
Pipe grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2019#Final
"SMRTV Director General" → "San Marino RTV (SMRTV) Director General" with the wikilink
Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest 2020

Done Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Before Eurovision

Img looks good!

Digital Battle

Remove Italian singer introduction to Senhit since it is clear she's the same person as Senit due to the pseudonym mention, plus remove the pipe here
Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2011
Remove pipe on "Stand By"
"for their preferred song." → "for the song."
[6] can remain in its first position but should be invoked second at the end of the para and not the penultimate sentence, due to backing the last two up
"Serhat, and Valentina Monetta and Jimmy Wilson," → "Serhat as well as Monetta and Wilson,"
Add (2019) in brackets rather than writing from 2019
"reported that it received" → "reported that the contest received" because otherwise it sounds like you are talking about the song
The table info should be written out in prose probably around this point, as two results is not enough to warrant a table
"for the year's participation." → "for the nation's participation in the 2020 contest."

Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

At Eurovision

"on 12 and 14 May," → "on 12 and 14 May, respectively,"
"the top ten countries from" → "the top 10 countries from" per MOS:NUM
"The EBU announced soon after" → "The European Broadcasting Union (EBU) announced thereafter" with the wikilink
"that were to" → "that were set to"

Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Alternative song contests

"of ten singers" → "of 10 singers"
"represented Austria at Eurovision" → "represented Austria in the Eurovision Song Contest"
"on 14 April," → "on 14 April 2020,"

Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

Copyvio score looks great at 15.8%!!!
Remove or replace ref 7 per WP:RSP
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 12
Change 'reaky!' to 'Freaky!' on ref 13

Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 08:32, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Kyle Peake: I believe I addressed all of your concerns! Let me know if I missed anything. Regarding a potential WP:GT, in your experience, would I be able to submit this grouping, omitting the ongoing 2021 article or would I have to wait until May/June for that to become a GA? This topic will have yearly additions, so I just wonder if there are only certain windows of time where nominations would be successful because of that. Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 ✓ Pass now and regarding a potential GT, you can nominate it before the 2021 contest like I did with Kanye West's studio albums even though Donda is pending release. However, you can use GT addition to add the 2021 contest when it becomes a GA for stopping the topic being demoted. --K. Peake 14:33, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]