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DateProcessResult
March 15, 2021Good article nomineeListed
May 4, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2017/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 12:56, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I will review this soon; hopefully you will succeed in promoting this GT ultimately! --K. Peake 12:56, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Wikilink Ralph Siegel in the infobox
  • Swap the order of the other two songwriters per the body
  • "and the completion of a tour that included a stops in" → "and promotional performances in" per the body
  • "San Marino performed tenth" → "San Marino performed 10th" per MOS:NUM
  • Shouldn't the Eurovision Song Contest final sub-section be retitled to grand final like most have been and then you fix the pipe accordingly?

 Done except the last one. There is a bit of a disagreement about how we want to refer to it. I'll update it to whatever term is decided when that happens. Grk1011 (talk) 15:09, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 It is best not to update it until the discussion is resolved, to avoid stability issues. --K. Peake 15:55, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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 Done

Before Eurovision

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Internal selection

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  • Pipe SMRTV to San Marino RTV on the img text
  • "On 7 March 2017, SMRTV Director General" → "On 7 March 2017, Radiotelevisione della Repubblica di San Marino (SMRTV) director general" with the pipe
  • Unless I missed something in the wording, the studios part is not sourced
  • Pipe 2012, 2013 and 2014 to their respective Eurovision articles
  • "2012 through 2015." → "2012 through to 2015."
  • The first sentence of SMRTV's response does not appear to be properly sourced
  • "to represent that nation;" → "to represent the nation;"

 Done

Promotion

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  • "were filmed by" → "was filmed by"
  • "on 24 March" → "on 24 March 2017"
  • "where they performed" → "where they performed the song"
  • "On 8 April, they performed during the ninth edition" → "On 8 April 2017, the two performed during the ninth annual edition"
  • Remove wikilink on Spain

 Done

At Eurovision

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 Done

Semi-final

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  • Img looks good!
  • "in dress rehearsals on" → "in respective dress rehearsals on"
  • "on 10 May," → "on 10 May 2017,"
  • Monetta's outfit is sourced as black and white, but Wilson's is only sourced as black so reword accordingly
  • The chandelier is unsourced
  • Last para looks good!

 Done

Voting

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  • Whole sub-section looks good apart from Fabrizio Raggi appearing not to be sourced as a chairperson, unless that's what Juror A indicates?

 Done

References

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  • Copyvio score looks quite good at 20.6%
  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Cite Quotidiano.net as publisher instead for ref 14
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 15 and 31 plus add SMRTV in brackets for both and wikilink San Marino RTV on the first ref
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 25

 Done

Final comments and verdict

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I believe I addressed all the issues you noted. Let me know if I missed anything! Grk1011 (talk) 23:34, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011  Pass now, you have implemented everything as far as I can see apart from the grand final point, but you have a valid reason not to! --K. Peake 07:38, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]