Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2015/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 12:02, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

One of your two Eurovision nominees, so I will help axe this from the queue! --K. Peake 12:02, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
"represented San Marino in the Junior Eurovision Song Contest." → "represented San Marino in the Junior Eurovision Song Contest on separate occasions."
"The 2015 entry was" → "The 2015 entry in the Eurovision Song Contest was" to be specific
"in Moscow, and a contest on social media" → "in Moscow and a contest on social media" with the wikilink

Background

Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest
"Their debut entry" → "The nation's debut entry"
"failed to qualify to the final" → "failed to qualify for the [[San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2008#Grand final|grand final" with the target
Target semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2008#Semi-final 1 to lead to the one the country competed in
"the final." → "the grand final." with the target
"Between 2012 and 2014," → "From 2012 to 2014,"
Add a source for Jürgens' years or reword to mentioning them being in the 1960s
"to the final," → "for the grand final;"
"to bring San Marino" → "to bring the nation"
"that the nation would" → "that San Marino would"

Before Eurovision

Internal selection

Img looks good!
"at SMRTV's studios." → "at the broadcaster's studios."
"while Simoncini represented" → "while Simoncini had represented"
Lowercase the Peppermints per MOS:THEMUSIC
"when she turned sixteen." → "when she turned 16." per MOS:NUM
"had composed twenty-three" → "had composed 23" but this sentence is not sourced
"Seventeen of those entries were written together with Meinunger." → "17 of those entries were written together with Bernd Meinunger."
"for the contest," → "for the Eurovision Song Contest,"
"These adaptations included..." this sentence is not sourced

Promotion

"on 16 March." → "on 16 March 2015."
"organization MEI, and record label" → "organization MEI and record label" with the wikilink
"The duo also embarked" → "Simoncini and Perniola also embarked"

At Eurovision

Target Eurovision Rules to Rules of the Eurovision Song Contest
Target Big Five to Big Five (Eurovision) per MOS:LINK2SECT
"are required to" → "were required to"
"the top ten countries" → "the top 10 countries" per MOS:NUM
"with countries with favourable voting histories" where is this part sourced?
Target second semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2015#Semi-final 2
Remove target on Radio San Marino
Replace wikilink and introduction on Monetta, as we already know what entries she performed
"during the final." → "during the grand final."

Semi-final

Img looks good!
"Anita Simoncini and Michele Perniola took part" → "Simoncini and Perniola took part"
"20 and 21 May." → "20 and 21 May 2015."
Wikilink Antonello Carozza
"in a white dress shirt," → "in a white shirt,"
"that becomes covered" → "that became covered"
"failed to qualify to" → "failed to qualify for"
"among the top ten nations." → "among the top 10 nations." per MOS:NUM

Voting

The second sentence does not appear to be sourced
"This jury was" are you sure it was only them and not all of the jury?
"and that the" → "and how the"
[36] should be solely at the end of the para since it is used for the last two sentences
"and grand final" → "and the grand final"
"San Marino scored six" → "the nation scored six"
"in the second semi-final and grand final of the contest," → "in the contest's second semi-final and grand final, respectively,"

Points awarded to San Marino

Good

Points awarded by San Marino

Good

Detailed jury voting results

There should not be two dashes after Barbara Andreini
No sources are provided for the tables below

References

Copyvio score looks great at 15.3!
Top job on the archiving!
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 11

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but I found original research to be the most prominent one here. --K. Peake 21:45, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Should be all set now, but just note that it's not original research if the sources are just unclear! Thanks for reviewing! Grk1011 (talk) 18:17, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 I do understand the difference but thank you for recognising potential confusion, though where is the second sentence of the voting sub-section backed up? --K. Peake 18:18, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It is in the source provided for that section, specifically for those 3 claims it reads:

Since last year, the European Broadcasting Union announces the list of national jury members in advance.

Members of the jury must pursue a profession in or related to the music industry;

Members of the jury shall be citizens of the country they represent;

If you're concerned about the "five", I can move up the source from the next section? Hope this helps. Grk1011 (talk) 18:29, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 Yes that is what I am concerned about, please invoke the source using a refname. --K. Peake 19:37, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

All set! Grk1011 (talk) 19:44, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Grk1011 ✓ Pass, apologies if this took a while longer than your previous GANs due to the confusion over the ref! --K. Peake 19:55, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]