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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 8, 2021Good article nomineeListed
May 4, 2021Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:San Marino in the Eurovision Song Contest 2014/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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A good number of Eurovision articles still pending, so I will take this on shortly! --K. Peake 17:33, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "though both entries failed to qualify for the grand final" → "though the entries failed to qualify for either grand final" or something similar
  • "in the first semi-final," → "in the first semi-final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014,"
  • "held four days later, where it" → "that was held four days later, where the nation"

Background

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  • Great job on not re-introducing the broadcaster like you did the past few times!
  • "for both 2012 and 2013" → "for 2012 and 2013"
  • "in the previous year's contest." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013." with the wikilink

Before Eurovision

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Internal selection

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  • Video is a neat addition!
  • "a month after the conclusion of the 2013 contest" this part is not mentioned by the source
This is covered by WP:CALC, similar to how we keep using "x days later". Grk1011 (talk) 15:05, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "On 13 March," → "On 13 March 2014,"
  • Remove target on snippets
  • Target "Maybe" to Maybe (Valentina Monetta song) on the first mention instead
  • Wikilink pre-order
  • Target dance to Dance music
  • "Media outlets suggested that these" → "Media outlets suggested these"
  • "the following day, and that the presence" → "the following day and the presence"
  • "program on 14 March" → "programme on 14 March 2014"
  • Remove comma after "Maybe"
  • "so that the song's meaning could be" → "so that the song could be"
  • "of Monetta's studio album" → "of Monetta's third studio album"
  • Remove excess spacing and the release year of the album in brackets
I don't understand this one? Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011 I meant to put add the release year in brackets. --K. Peake 16:04, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Grk1011 (talk) 17:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Promotion

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  • "they were shot at" → "the former video was shot at"
  • "staged a promotion tour, appearing on 5 April" → "staged a promotional tour, appearing on 5 April 2014"
  • "staged to serve" → "that was staged to serve"
  • "in the United Kingdom." → "of the United Kingdom."

At Eurovision

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  • Change the United Kingdom to the UK because you have already mentioned the country's full name
  • "was held at Copenhagen City Hall" → "was held in Copenhagen" as the source reflects
  • "for the Eurovision Song Contest" → "for the Eurovision Song Contest 2014"
  • Img looks good!
  • "she was joined" → "Monetta was joined"
  • "with bluish a fan-like cloth arrangement" → "with a fan-like cloth arrangement" unless [23] mentions bluish, then move it to being the word after a
  • "was by art director" → "was handled by art director"
  • Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2014#Grand final
  • "San Marino qualified for" → "the nation qualified for"
  • [1] should also be at the end of the above sentence, as it backs that up
  • "In the grand final, held on," → "In the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2014, held on,"
  • "marked nation's highest placing" → "marked the nation's highest placing"
  • "both the semi-finals" → "both of the semi-finals"
  • "were also broadcast online" → "was also available online"

Voting

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Points awarded to San Marino
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  • The second table is incorrectly titled Points awarded by San Marino (Grand final)
Points awarded by San Marino
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  • Good
Detailed jury voting results
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  • The members are not backed up by [41] and Ghiotti should not have two dashes by her credits

References

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  • Copyvio score looks amazing at 7.4%!!!
  • Nice job using the tool to archive!
  • Fix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 27

Final comments and verdict

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I have made the requested edits. One question above though. Grk1011 (talk) 15:03, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]