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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 15:59, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

There is no bias towards you despite this review coming directly after my previous one; it is because they are so many Eurovision contest nominees! --K. Peake 15:59, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "at the annual event." → "in the contest."
  • Target to Eurovision Song Contest 2012 should be on "2012 contest" text instead
  • Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2013#Final
  • "This marked their best" → "However, this marked the nation's best"

Background

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  • Remove nation's broadcaster introduction, as you have already provided that in the lead
  • "for the grand final." → "for the respective grand finals."
  • "at the contest was" → "in the contest was"

Before Eurovision

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Internal selection

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  • Target SMRTV to San Marino RTV on the img text
  • "and the song" → "with the song"
  • Target final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012#Grand final
  • Target first semi-final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012#Semi-final_1
  • "as an Italian pop ballad with hints of dance" → "as a ballad with hints of dance" with the targets, as that is what the source actually says
  • "in the Summer of 2012" → "in August 2012" because that is directly stated by the source
  • "Unlike her previous year's entry," → "Unlike Monetta's entry for the previous year,"
  • "until 15 March" → "until 15 March 2013"
  • "watched online on" → "be watched online on" but the SMRTV and evening parts do not appear to be sourced
  • "in discussing their thoughts" → "to discuss her thoughts"
  • "Roberto Moretti, and the writers" → "Roberto Moretti and the writers"
  • "of "Crisalide (Vola)" was" → "for "Crisalide (Vola)" was"
  • "staged a promotion tour," → "staged a promotional tour,"
  • Melkweg is not mentioned as a club by any of the sources
  • "Later that month on 21 April," → "Nine days later,"
  • [17][16] should be put in numerical order

At Eurovision

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  • Wikilink chrysalis on the img text per MOS:LINK2SECT
  • Remove wikilink on Sweden
  • Remove "at the time", as those rules are still the same now
  • Mention the draw was in Malmö
  • "into one of the two semi-finals," → "into one of the two semi-finals and which half of the show they would perform in,"
  • "of the event" → "of the contest"
  • [23] should be solely at the end of the para, as it backs up the last two sentences
  • "On 28 March," → "On 28 March 2013,"
  • "where she was seen" → "with her being seen"
  • Wikilink chrysalis

Voting

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  • "At the second semi-final," → "In the second semi-final,"
  • "This also marked" → "The placement marked" plus swap this with the previous sentence in the order
  • "consisting of Massimiliano Messieri," → "consisting of Messieri,"
  • "announcing the country's" → "who announced the country's"
Points awarded to San Marino
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  • Good
Points awarded by San Marino
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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks amazing again at 7.4!!
  • Archive all of these by using the tool Top job on archiving so quick for this one after the comments on my previous review!
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 8 and 13
  • eurofestivalnews.com → Eurofestival News on ref 27, citing as publisher instead
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 28 and add (EBU) in brackets for European Broadcasting Union, removing the wikilink also

Final comments and verdict

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Done, with one comment noted above. Grk1011 (talk) 18:39, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011 Must have been an issue with google translate there, but don't you still need to cite the parts about streaming online with SMRTV? --K. Peake 18:43, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
In the cited source it lists viewing options at the bottom, including the following: "Streaming via web sul sito ufficiale smtvsanmarino.sm". Grk1011 (talk) 18:46, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011 Oh sorry, I must have missed that. ✓ Pass after all of my queries have been resolved! --K. Peake 18:51, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
No worries, I don't know Italian either so I'm also relying on translated pages! Grk1011 (talk) 18:52, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Let's hope your translator is fully accurate then, if not I'm sure someone more familiar with the language will correct the text eventually! --K. Peake 07:15, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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