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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:19, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:19, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Early life and career
[edit]- Wikilink Eastern District High School and captalize the start of the third and fourth words in the school's name
- Should semi-pro be changed to semi-professional?
- Who was Connie Mack?
Major league career
[edit]- "and was used as a reliever his first season," - add either "in" or "during" in this statement
Later life
[edit]- "he was traded to the Philadelphia Athletics along with Ray Murray in a trade that also involved the Chicago White Sox." - repititon of the word trade
References
[edit]- No dead links
Good work so far. On hold MWright96 (talk) 18:47, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
- Issues all fixed, thanks for the review. As an aside, if you think the three-way trade part would be better with the entire trade included I could try to add that. I usually do, but since it involved three teams and seven players I thought it'd be overkill since he didn't play with any of them outside of Murray. Wizardman 00:50, 9 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for the clarification. I found no remaining issues and I am happy to pass this. MWright96 (talk) 06:17, 9 August 2016 (UTC)