Talk:Sam Zoldak

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Review: August 9, 2016. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Sam Zoldak appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 19 September 2007. The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Major League Baseball pitcher Sam Zoldak's only home run in his major league career did not count after the game was cancelled because of rain?

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:19, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:19, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Early life and career

Wikilink Eastern District High School and captalize the start of the third and fourth words in the school's name
Should semi-pro be changed to semi-professional?
Who was Connie Mack?

Major league career

"and was used as a reliever his first season," - add either "in" or "during" in this statement

Later life

"he was traded to the Philadelphia Athletics along with Ray Murray in a trade that also involved the Chicago White Sox." - repititon of the word trade

References

No dead links

Good work so far. On hold MWright96 (talk) 18:47, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Issues all fixed, thanks for the review. As an aside, if you think the three-way trade part would be better with the entire trade included I could try to add that. I usually do, but since it involved three teams and seven players I thought it'd be overkill since he didn't play with any of them outside of Murray. Wizardman 00:50, 9 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the clarification. I found no remaining issues and I am happy to pass this. MWright96 (talk) 06:17, 9 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]