Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2000 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Wikilink Kim Collins and Velma Bass in the lead
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Background

• "Saint Kitts and Nevis made its Olympic debut in 1996 sending ten athletes." - better: Saint Kitts and Nevis made their first appearance at the Olympics in 1996, sending ten athletes
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• " Velma Bass previously competed at the 1996 Summer Olympics in the women's 4 × 100 meters relay." - change to partook for variety
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Athletics

• "This was the second Olympic appearance for both Collins and Bass, both" - comma inbetween the words "Bass" and "both" needs to be replaced with a semi colon
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter." - Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter dashes
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "Collins finished fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, failing to advance to the finals." - Collins placed fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, and thus failed to advance to the finals.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "and eighth in the semi finals for the 200 meter." - 200 meter sprint
  • done Kees08 (Talk)

Good work on this so far. You're on the right track for on getting this series of articles into a Good Topic. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:20, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

• @MWright96: Addressed everything you noted (and fixed a couple other things I noticed). Let me know if you find anything else and I will fix it. I will hit the other articles soon. Kees08 (Talk) 03:12, 24 October 2017 (UTC)
  • @Kees08: Thank you for addressing the issues I raised. Spotted nothing else that needs doing so this article can now be promoted to GA. MWright96 (talk) 05:50, 24 October 2017 (UTC)