Talk:Safe Return (statue)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Taking up this review. No major issues jumped out on a first read. Ghosts of Europa (talk · contribs) 02:00, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

On the whole, this looks good. Earwig shows no issues. It's focused and easy to read. Nice detective work compiling these newspaper articles, including a classified ad!

I think some of your citations got mixed up, probably because you're mostly citing the same authors in the same newspaper. I fixed a few of these, but there are a few outstanding issues:

• The first sentence says the statue is also called "Fishermen's Memorial". This isn't cited or mentioned in the body.
  • Google Maps calls it this but I couldn't find a source so I'll just remove that. - G
• The anchor's supposed 1900 date is cited to two sources, but I don't see where citation 3 ("Memorial") mentions a date for it.
  • That was meant to be slightly earlier, oops. Good catch. - G
• The granite plinth, trucked to the site from South Dakota, was installed on May 26, 1999, with the statue then hoisted atop the pedestal by crane - This cites an article from 1996, even though it happened in 1999.
  • Oh, I didn't see this! Apologies, corrected the cite. -G
• Six names have been added to the memorial since 2003 to commemorate other local fishermen who died at sea - The way I read this, the article implies there have been more than six names, and it's just listing six as examples.
  • Oh, good point. Let me rephrase that. - G
• The plaques on the memorial depict a purse seiner, Squalicum Harbor, a ship's wheelhouse, and a Native American fisherman - This source doesn't mention the plaques.
  • It calls them panels, but I think those are synonymous here. Rephrased anyhow because I think panel is a better word. - G
    • My bad, I was scanning for the word "plaque" and missed this. - GoE

Once you fix up these citations, I'm happy to approve this!

• @Ghosts of Europa: Thank you very much for your feedback! Responded. Generalissima (talk) 03:59, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

oh @Ghosts of Europa: i forgot to ping when i fixed that last bit. Generalissima (talk) 18:39, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

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