Talk:Sacrament (Millennium)/GA1
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 02:10, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: "Meanwhile, Black#s daughter" -> "Meanwhile, Black's daughter"
- Production: "Spotnitz had previously "Weeds" earlier in the first season" I think 'wrote' should be in there somewhere
- Production: "Watkins' work on the episode led to him a director and executive producer" I'm not entirely sure what this is supposed to mean, but I assume it could be re-written as "Watkins' work on the episode led him to become a director and executive producer"
- Production: "Puente would kill her tenants for their money, burying their bodies in the gardens of the properties they were letting" -> "Puente would kill her tenants for their money and bury their bodies in the gardens of the properties they were letting" Also, what does letting mean in this sentence? I assume, it means borrowing or renting.
On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 02:10, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing this one for me (I kinda feel like I'm spoiling the series for you...). I've addressed the points you've raised; and "letting" is renting a property. Maybe it's not that common in US English, though? GRAPPLE X 16:00, 21 May 2012 (UTC)
- Don't worry about spoiling. I generally like to read through the wikipedia articles before watching shows anyway; it's just a weird way I work. This show does seem really cool, though. I changed "letting" to "renting", just because its not so common in the US. Other than that, I'm passing! Good job.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:28, 21 May 2012 (UTC)