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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk06:09, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ironsides
Ironsides

Created by GreatLakesShips (talk). Self-nominated at 23:21, 2 September 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: SS Lac La Belle was rated a stub but I moved it to start, I think it's a bit more than stub. Not sure if that would affect the nomination if it was. But yeah, all looks good! EchetusXe 08:08, 3 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:SS Lac La Belle/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:20, 11 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "between Cleveland, and Lake Superior" no need for comma.
  • "As of 2021, the wreck..." avoid single sentence para, merge that into the previous lead para.
  • "Cleveland, Ohio by" comma after Ohio.
  • "She was launched" last "she" was the sister ship.
  • "her career ... her career..." repetitive.
  • "on Lake Superior, sustaining" overlinked.
  • "from Ontonagon, Michigan for" comma after Michigan.
  • "St Clair River" not St. Clair River like before?
  • "the Detroit Free Press reported" italics.
  • Lee and Swayze refs need an en-dash not a spaced hyphen.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:41, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Done. GreatLakesShips (talk) 20:29, 12 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]