Talk:SMS Schwalbe (1887)

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Date	Process	Result
April 21, 2014	Good article nominee	Listed
October 8, 2014	Good topic candidate	Promoted

Current status: Good article

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomobe03 (talk · contribs) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this review shortly.--Tomobe03 (talk) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

No disambiguation links (no action requried)
No broken links per checklinks report (no action required)
No duplicate links (no action required)
Images are suitably sourced and licensed, and have suitable captions - however "Deutsch Ost-Afrika,1892.jpg" (map) licence at the Commons indicates US-PD tag need be added.
- Added the US-1923 tag.
Referencing appears to be in order (no action required)
In the section of "Second deployment overseas", there is the following sentence: "There, she was commissioned a second time three days later." Given the context, I get the impression this is an error, and it should read "There, she was decommissioned a second time three days later." Is that so, or is there some other clarification missing?
- Yeah, it should be decommissioned, good catch.

Besides an image licensing nag (a minor one at that) there's only one prose issue I spotted in the way of successful promotion of this GAN. Cheers.--Tomobe03 (talk) 14:40, 19 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review as always, Tomobe. Parsecboy (talk) 12:17, 21 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome. All clear now, so passing.--Tomobe03 (talk) 12:46, 21 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]