Talk:SMS Preussischer Adler/GA1

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 07:31, 30 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Here am I again claiming my seat here. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 07:31, 30 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

SMS Preussischer Adler was a paddle steamer originally Where is the SMS note?\
- Added
she was capable of reaching 11.5 knots (21.3 km/h; 13.2 mph) from 990 PS (980 ihp) Link PS and ihp.
- Both are already linked
departed Kiel on 19 September and had reached Piraeus, Greece Pipe Greece to the Kingdom of Greece.
- Done, but linked earlier
From Brest, the ships steamed to Cherbourg, France Pipe France to the Second French Empire.
- Done
with Niels Juel and stopped in Den Helder, the Netherlands on 15 February Unlink the Netherlands.
- Done
the Danes to withdraw their blockade.[15][9] Re-order the refs here.
- Done
the soldiers as they engaged the defending Danish forces.[17][9] Same as above.
- Guess I wasn't paying attention to that this time, eh?
early career has a post steamer, she had a capacity to carry Replace "had a capacity to" with "could".
- Done
of the Prussian Navy after it had been refounded . We do not need a space before the dot.
- Good catch
thereafter seeing short periods of time in her training Remove "of time".
- Done

Infobox

Looks good to me.

Images

File:Josef Carl Püttner Seegefecht bei Helgoland 1864.jpg's source link doesn't go to the picture?
- Fixed
File:SMS König Wilhelm at Gravesend.jpg has a dead link.
- I can't sort this out right now (Flikr is blocked at work, for some reason) so I'll just remove it for the time being

Sources

Some ISBNs use hyphens and others don't maybe standardise them.
- Done
Embree's book needs a Google Books' URL.
The rest looks good to me.

That's anything from me. Sorry to be a little bit late, right now I'm a little bit struggling with my left index finger. I got a deep cut in it after I worked at home. Right now it wears a bandage which has the size of two key letters. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 16:28, 8 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

That doesn't sound like much fun - I stabbed my hand opening a box for my daughter a couple of months ago, requiring a couple of stitches, and it was unpleasant to use that hand for a couple of weeks. Parsecboy (talk) 15:02, 9 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I think it is good to go. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 18:18, 10 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]