Talk:SMS Pommerania/GA1

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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 16:34, 13 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

She also received four 3.7 cm (1.5 in) Hotchkiss revolver cannon in 1880 British plural form of the word cannon.
- I don't know that that's specifically British.

She left Kiel in mid-June 1871 for the first research trip Maybe link Kiel.
- Good catch
training squadron. The ships were sent to Salonika Was this the official name of the city? Because the Thessaloniki article says that "Salonika" was written with a "c" and not a "k".
- It's an accepted spelling in English - see Thessaloniki#Names_and_etymology.
she proceeded to Wilhelmshaven and then back through the Skagerrak Link Wilhelmshaven.
- Done
and Skagerrak to Bergen, Norway. She then steamed south across Norway was part of the Union Sweden and Norway so maybe pipe it to it?
- Done
She was sold in 1892 to a Hamburg-based company Link Hamburg.
- Done
the ship was operated by the firm Paulsen & Ivers Is there a link to the firm Paulsen & Ivers?
- No, not that I'm aware of.
but was lost with all hands on her first voyage as a merchant ship on 20 January 1894 Remove the "on 20" with "in".
- Done
No edit wars.

Infobox

No tonnes?
- Good catch
No length of the long at the waterline?
- I usually only do the overall length in the box
Link knots.
- Done
Maybe add her renamed name in the infobox and the date or isn't that necessary?
- Added.

Images

You have a great picture, hopefully, they'd become an FP. I can imagine that they'd be gorgeous.
- Unfortunately, it chops off the front of the ship, but it's all I've been able to find.

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