Talk:Rusco Tower/GA1

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:30, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This article looks interesting, I'll give this one a review. Hog Farm _Bacon 16:30, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Is there a link for Bombie?
Bombie is a disambiguation page for a couple of Thomas MacLellan's family members (one of whom is also called Thomas Maclellan of Bombie - later generation, not the same chap); I could link it to Clan MacLellan is you think that would be helpful for readers?

What are the second floor and the attic subdivided into?
I assume they're bedrooms and possibly toilet facilities, but the source isn't specific - it just says they've been subdivided. I could add something like 'into a number of smaller rooms' if you like?

What year did the Porter incident occur in?
Annoyingly, the source does not say. I assume it must have been between 1511, when he was pardoned, and 1523, but I can't be more specific based on the sources I've got. Reid is citing primary archival sources for this story - it's beyond my ability to access those and try to work out the dates.

The external link is used as a reference, so it is superfluous as an external link. Best to remove it
DoneFair point - removed.

Be consistent with your use of Title Case, put the obituary and Lindsay into title case
Done
Reid got an OCLC?
Done

This article's in great shape. Good job, not much to pick on here. Placing on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 18:01, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Hog Farm Thanks for taking a look - see above, I've done what I can, but a few of your points are trickier, let me know what you think I should so. Cheers GirthSummit _(blether) 15:33, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]