Talk:Rosa Diaz/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Vortex3427 (talk · contribs) 05:48, 12 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this.

Thanks, @Vortex3427! What's been happening with this review so far? theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:06, 27 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I completely forgot about this. I'll start this soon. — VORTEX³⁴²⁷ (Talk!) 07:08, 27 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, starting.

Sources are all reliable.
created for her instead... Add ref 2 to the end of this sentence. Additionally, ref 1 says that Linetti auditioned for Diaz, not when she was named Megan.
with the Chicago Tribune remarking that she was "beyond thrilled". Is the attribution needed here. They're interviewing her in this article; it's safe to assume the information directly came from her.
Link first instance of Latina (not as known outside US) and Straight man.
She also frequently is shown to have anger management issues; This is directly mentioned in the NY Times source

— VORTEX³⁴²⁷ (Talk!) 07:54, 27 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome! Responses:

:)
Not sure why ref 2 needs to be added? Also, That's likely just retconning on the part of hollywood.com – Rosa wasn't named Rosa until after Beatriz was cast for the part (Lange 2015).
It's pretty flowery, i just cut it in a merge of the two sentences.
Linked!
I'm hesitant to lay down the personality traits of a character in wikivoice; better to hedge a bit.

theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 23:10, 27 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

1. To support initially created under the name "Megan"...

4. The She also frequently is shown to have anger management issues; is already in the article, but is supported by the GQ source. The NY Times article uses the exact words "anger management".

"beating the crap out of the ballerinas" I think this is the exact quote from the show, but the NY Times says instead "beating up the ballerinas"
carried emotional Carried more emotional
Palmer Haasch with Polygon reported that Rosa's declaration, "I'm bi", was the first time the phrase had been used on network television. Haash also reported that this was not true: This part was... confusing. Reading the article, it says that co-creator Dan Goor was the one who claimed that the phrase was the first time it'd been used on network tv.
Link first instance of Chicago Tribune and "first episode" to New Captain

@Theleekycauldron: Anyway, that's it! Sorry for the... two-week long wait. — VORTEX³⁴²⁷ (Talk!) 01:33, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Vortex3427: No worries! I think I've fixed it up now – I'd normally provide the diff, but I'm so tired :) theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 08:21, 28 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Passing now... — VORTEX³⁴²⁷ (Talk!) 01:50, 29 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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