Talk:Rory Delap/GA1

GA Review

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Hi, I'll be reviewing this. Before even starting to review the prose and other criteria, there are some obvious concerns that should be adressed.

The lead is not long enough, and does not summarize the article
The first block of text under "Career" is unsourced
Almonst nothing is written about half his career, namely from 1994 to 2001. This is the most serious concern.
Many statements are unsourced, including the claimed length of his throws
The "International career" section is thin
The career statistics are somewhat dated (from December 2008)
Most of the section "Personal life" is unsourced

This is not enough to quick-fail the article, but the article has a long way to go before it can be considered as a Good Article candidate. Nonetheless, it will be put on hold for a week. Punkmorten (talk) 11:42, 27 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

No improvements. Failed. Punkmorten (talk) 09:03, 6 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Seems Wenger's opinions have changed: http://www.espnstar.com/football/premier-league/news/detail/item404284/Wenger:-Rory-Delap-is-dangerous/ —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.254.86.183 (talk) 18:07, 27 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]