Talk:Rodeo (Lil Nas X and Cardi B song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 11:20, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

To begin with, on the lead we avoid links, so I would add them to the prose and being honest not sure why they are there as I see it as a given. "Daytrip's David Biral and Denzel Baptiste, Roy Lenzo, and Russ Chell" → all of these people belong to the production team? As I was reading the infobox it doesn't look like that. Speaking of the Background and composition more "meat" could and should be added to the latter some stuff could be taken from the section below, as I will point out.

Regarding the Critical reception section, there are major flaws with the inclusion of a blog "Jezebel", furthermore some of the reviews stat not only their opinion but talk about the composition of the song which could be moved to the paragraph above, take a look at the Rolling Stone review as an example. The chart performance section is quite incomplete, as it only mentions four countries and the song charted in 15 different countries, of course, there is no need to mention all of them, but a couple more so the paragraph doesn't have two sentences. The Credits and personnel section needs to be mentioned in a written paragraph as well. The Greece International Digital needs to be archived on its peak.

In conclusion, this article does not only seemed rushed but is also far from being broad in its coverage as simple there is very few information, not every single article can be a good article. On top of that, this song is fairly recent and, who knows, it might become a single in the future and will have more coverage by then. Failing. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:10, 1 September 2019 (UTC)