Talk:Robotron: 2084/GA1
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GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- Just two things:
- A. Prose quality:
- Defeating all the robots on the screen brings a more difficult wave; a cycle which continues until the character is defeated and player depletes extra attempts to continue the game.
- Doesn't flow very well, especially "brings a more difficult wave" and "player depletes extra attempts to continue the game". Suggest a rewrite such as "...takes the player to a more difficult wave" for the first part and "...the player loses all lives". Another suggestion would be to explain that players lose a life if hit be a robot or object, and the game ends when players have lost all their lives.
- The last two paragraphs in the Development section are both a tad long. I suggest splitting those last two into three or four smaller paragraphs for better readability.
- Defeating all the robots on the screen brings a more difficult wave; a cycle which continues until the character is defeated and player depletes extra attempts to continue the game.
- B. MoS compliance:
- References check out using refToolbar. External links all check out here.
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- Very well covered.
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Good usage of captions.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Criteria 3 through 6 look very good so far. Combing through the content to see if it meets 1 and 2 is in progress and, due to the length of the article, may take some time. MuZemike 21:56, 16 April 2009 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
- Review placed on hold to address the two issues I mentioned above in 1a. MuZemike 17:31, 17 April 2009 (UTC)
I believe I've addressed the prose issues you brought up. Please let me know if there is anything else. (Guyinblack25 talk 23:59, 17 April 2009 (UTC))
- Looks good. It passes. MuZemike 00:42, 18 April 2009 (UTC)