Talk:Robotomy

Robotomy has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: October 13, 2014. (Reviewed version).

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A fact from Robotomy appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 29 October 2014 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Robotomy is the shortest-running show on Cartoon Network?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2014/October. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Robotomy.

Wikipedia

"No reruns"

I'm not sure that's the case, as it's airing right now (see timestamp) as part of Cartoon Planet. Just a heads up. As an aside, I wish they made more of this. It has a bunch of great people behind it. Vocor (talk) 01:48, 12 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Robotomy/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 22:01, 7 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review. -- Zanimum (talk) 22:01, 7 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Zanimum: Thanks! ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend) 22:22, 7 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

There are definitely adventure elements, are there... action I can see from this article, but without reading the episode summaries, I'm not seeing evidence in this article.
- Removed—don't know how that got in there either. ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend)
  - A drama film's article stood on Wikipedia as a comedy, until I corrected it a few months ago; it happens.

Lead

A little reword here.
- Thank you. ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend)
"is regarded as the shortest-running show on the network": there's no definitive answer?
- Though only one source mentions this it seems pretty definite to me compared to all other original series on the network; rephrased. ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend)

Plot

"typically dating"... is he seeing other female robots in some episodes?
- Not that I've seen; rephrased. ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend)
"; he is typically dating Maimy to Thrasher's disdain." --> "; to Thrasher's disdain, he is dating Maimy."
- Done; thanks. ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend)

Production

The fact that Cartoon Network contacted Buckley, and kept bringing the duo in sounds like he had a good track record. Was he a showrunner before?
- Incredibly, this is his only television credit. He's an author by profession; should I include this somewhere? ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend)

Passes Checklinks.

Passing External links.

There's more for me to review, but here's a bit. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:47, 12 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Zanimum: Thank you for your comments! ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend) 18:45, 12 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

- I've reworded a bit of the Production section, but mainly it was reordering a few sentences of the last two paragraphs, to get all the design comments and all the design comments together. The article seems to be in good shape now, so GA! -- Zanimum (talk) 18:14, 13 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  - @Zanimum: Sorry for this late reply. You're copy edits make it look much better—thanks so much for taking the time to review this! ₂₃W (talk · stalk · pend) 02:29, 15 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]