Talk:Robert William Fisher/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:50, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
- Add a WP:DATECOMMA after "April 13, 1961".
- "William Fisher, a banker, and mother, Jan Howell" – reword
- Remove the comma after "in California".
- "As of April 2003, FBI had" → "By April 2003, the FBI had"
- "as as firefighter" → "as a firefighter"
- Archive sources (you can use this).
- References #12 and #13 should be properly cited.
- That's it. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:24, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
- Hello Some Dude From North Carolina. I've finished with most of this. I have added the tool to archive sources from my account, but I don't know how to use it. Is there a need for sources to be archived? I don't think it's required. Everything else is done. Display name 99 (talk) 14:42, 23 July 2021 (UTC)